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Avoiding Kryptonite

"He who looks outside, dreams. He who looks inside, awakens."
                                                                  Carl Gustave Jung

Be not manacled, bound or tightly tethered
to a paradigm that appears to be status quo
Being mired in quicksand made of torpor
will observe you drowning in an undertow

Look inside yourself to become a flowing river
willing to accept waters of many tributaries
those that offer new elements of enrichment
Awaken your mind to the 'what ifs' of estuaries

Don't wallow or flounder about in muck and silt
Widen your banks until they expand without edge
Let your thoughts become ripples on your surface
then follow them to seek wisdom and knowledge

Do battle with the stagnation of complacency
It's a human fault we often label, "satisfaction"
but if truth be told, it should be called "passivity"
Always push one step further by taking action

Escape from entrapment in dungeons of darkness
Brush away the leaden clouds from your vision
that may be guilty of having obscured your insight
Make a breakthrough by creating a simple revision

Delusions and blurred illusions will soon fade away
You don't have to leap building of soaring height
You're not Super Man, but don't allow your apathy
and laidback demeanor to become your kryptonite

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 7/29/2023 11:01:00 AM
I can only say, wow, such an inspirational poem.
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/29/2023 11:36:00 AM
Jay, your 'wow' is all you have to say. Thank you, and I like your new picture in front of the Taj Mahal.
Date: 7/29/2023 5:00:00 AM
Lin, I am so impressed with your inspirational lines! So beautifully and poetically crafted , your poem sends a powerful message and is a delightful read!! So well done!! Happy Saturday xxoo
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/29/2023 11:35:00 AM
Good afternoon, Mike and thank you for such encouraging comments you always leave for my poetry. Hugs and wishes for a great weekend!
Date: 7/28/2023 10:50:00 AM
Stirring words, Lin! Definitely a call to step out and into a place of the unknown where we may fall but the rewards are often great if we travel on! This place you invite us into is the site of invention and miracles as we stumble into the arms of inspiration and new knowledge. In the movie Amadeus, Salieri ends by saying "Mediocrity! All is mediocrity!" I have remembered those lines as comfortable mediocrity is kryptonite to the creative soul. Love this! Blessings on your journey.
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/28/2023 12:27:00 PM
Mediocrity is something we should never settle for. That saying, “if it’s worth doing…” The effort put forth in doing something right always pays rewards. Thank you for such wonderful remarks, Sam. They’re much appreciated.
Date: 7/28/2023 10:28:00 AM
Brilliant Lin, Do battle with the stagnation of complacency, yes indeed keep pushing and pressing forward into the unknown, kryptonite is people’s own reluctance to look past the accepted norms, we’re definitely singing off the same hymn sheet here, cheers David
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/28/2023 12:24:00 PM
A lazy society’ wants to be handed everything as if it’s owed to us. We have become complacent in many areas, thinking… that’s good enough. I’ll sing in your choir any day, David.
Date: 7/28/2023 10:14:00 AM
what a powerful uplifting piece Lin i especially like the 4th Stanza - I've got a challenging job to complete this year and thought it is a scary prospect I am determined for it to come to fruition! hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/28/2023 10:20:00 AM
I’ve never known you to be complacent, Jan. You’re on top of getting what you want and there’s no stopping you now. Thanks you for taking my words to heart.
Date: 7/28/2023 9:53:00 AM
Love this Lin.
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/28/2023 10:18:00 AM
Thank you very much, Vickey. .

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