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8/24/2024 for THE WHISPERS OF AUTUMN Poetry Contest sponsored by John Lawless

Autumn Haunting

Gold autumn leaves when they drop to the ground
remind those abandoned of summer love, 
falling and making a whispering sound,
as dead ghosts come down to haunt from above.

One spirit does not want me to be free.
Her soft voice seeks to ask me what She meant,
descending through the decades to find me -
that leaf print by a classroom, in cement.

This fossilized specter asks me riddles - 
Is Autumn the beginning or the end? 
Does a violin cry when it fiddles?
One day I'll say "bye" to this phantom friend - 

an imprint so lonely, it will be there
when I'm gone, and nobody's left to care.
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Ashley Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 4:57 PM
Dear David, your melancholic musings and reverie of a soft-voiced someone who was lost to you is beautifully expressed with creative, intriguing imagery. Congratulations for your success in John’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Crandall Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 5:56 PM
Thanks Susan! I like your description of my poem - almost better than the poem itself - lol.
Delaney Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 3:49 PM
Congratulations, David: So interesting that a a leaf imprint in concrete can bring such haunting memories. Cheers, SuZ
Crandall Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 7:57 PM
Thanks Suzanne! I agree.
Lawless Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 1:16 PM
a VERY interesting take on the theme David. a mystery...of sorts...an old friend...a lost love....a melancholy moment....captured. thanks for participating.
Crandall Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 1:59 PM
Thanks John - I appreciate your comments, and I enjoyed the prompt and the contents!
Greenhough Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 9:14 PM
I enjoy this ghost tale. It is appropriate for Fall. I enjoy the chills of the cool weather that will come, and chill of a good haunting.
Crandall Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 9:20 PM
Thanks Hilda!
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