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8/24/2024 for THE WHISPERS OF AUTUMN Poetry Contest sponsored by John Lawless

Gold autumn leaves when they drop to the ground remind those abandoned of summer love, falling and making a whispering sound, as dead ghosts come down to haunt from above. One spirit does not want me to be free. Her soft voice seeks to ask me what She meant, descending through the decades to find me - that leaf print by a classroom, in cement. This fossilized specter asks me riddles - Is Autumn the beginning or the end? Does a violin cry when it fiddles? One day I'll say "bye" to this phantom friend - an imprint so lonely, it will be there when I'm gone, and nobody's left to care.

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Date: 9/25/2024 4:57:00 PM
Dear David, your melancholic musings and reverie of a soft-voiced someone who was lost to you is beautifully expressed with creative, intriguing imagery. Congratulations for your success in John’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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David Crandall
Date: 9/25/2024 5:56:00 PM
Thanks Susan! I like your description of my poem - almost better than the poem itself - lol.
Date: 9/23/2024 3:49:00 PM
Congratulations, David: So interesting that a a leaf imprint in concrete can bring such haunting memories. Cheers, SuZ
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Date: 9/23/2024 7:57:00 PM
Thanks Suzanne! I agree.
Date: 9/23/2024 1:16:00 PM
a VERY interesting take on the theme David. a mystery...of sorts...an old friend...a lost love....a melancholy moment....captured. thanks for participating.
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David Crandall
Date: 9/23/2024 1:59:00 PM
Thanks John - I appreciate your comments, and I enjoyed the prompt and the contents!
Date: 8/24/2024 9:14:00 PM
I enjoy this ghost tale. It is appropriate for Fall. I enjoy the chills of the cool weather that will come, and chill of a good haunting.
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David Crandall
Date: 8/24/2024 9:20:00 PM
Thanks Hilda!

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