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No torrid steel rod cauterized my wounds
I could not lick the festering gashes clean
Your sharp-bladed tongue bit too deep
fangs plunged with each vile cursed scene

No mere prick or scratch did you inflict
as thorns draw drops from a finger laid bare
You severed our dangling cord with a stare
Without gauntlet thrown before you swayed
I was waylaid in the pitfall of vows betrayed

I sat weeping upon moistened ground
faintly hearing from ears, a snarling sound
a vile bitterness in your laughter as I stirred
If you have a conscience, I shall be its burr

You turned your back and sidled away 
basking in glory; your cruelty had been done
but there is no victory for you, nothing won
for a man whose feet were molded of clay

How often you preyed on weakness of others
while you played at being sanctimonious
Liquid courage brings death that smothers
but I escaped the hold you once tightly held
before my life had been snuffed and felled

I still breathe and I've no fear to speak
I've been set free, and I'm no longer weak
My tongue holds daggers of its own
whetted on the grind stone of your deception
I was hungry for strength, parched with thirst
to take vengeance as my anger grew
emotions that were long past due

Felling you would then label me a doer of evil 
which is something I would never desire to be
Vengeance will never be mine to take
knowing this is true is what set me free

Years will pass but I shall never forget
that I was true to you, yet I sorely regret
not realizing the kind of person I loved
I've moved on and no longer grieve
while you still swim in the fiery waters
of your besotted world of make believe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/29/2017 12:26:00 PM
very strong, very dark and deep in meaning; at first i thought this was about the evil one, then realised it's about a former lover? i hope you're doing better, but still, compelling to read. nice! cheers!
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Date: 7/29/2017 12:31:00 PM
Thanks, John. It's open to interpretation. I appreciate you for stopping by for a read
Date: 7/24/2017 12:21:00 AM
It's very painful when something like this happens in your life. Moving on is hard to do....
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Date: 7/24/2017 5:05:00 AM
It's extremely hard to get past the emotional harm, but we do. Thanks so much, Darren.
Date: 7/23/2017 4:49:00 PM
Wow! An honest and powerful piece of poetry; sad to visualize anyone like that, though. Beautifully done.
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Date: 7/23/2017 6:36:00 PM
I'm glad that you can't visualize the cruelty of such people like that. Thanks, M. L.
Date: 7/23/2017 3:40:00 PM
powerfully penned Lin. Betrayal in our lives from those we thought we could trust is hard to bear:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2017 6:35:00 PM
Aye, it is. And fortunate we are when we come out of that kind of situation with the sense to know that we have the strength to get past the heartache...with the help of God. Thanks, Jan.
Date: 7/23/2017 11:07:00 AM
Excellent post Lin...it is hard to see until you are out of the situation. That's why we call them ex to x out the bad memories. Usually their ways don't change. Just concentrate on being the best you and don't worry about the rest.
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Date: 7/23/2017 11:43:00 AM
Thanks a whole bunch, Tim. and lol at your reasoning for the term, 'ex.' I am staying true to myself and thanks for the encouragement.

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