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As Autumn's Breeze

Summer languid daydreaming stance is over. Cooler breezes blow, and robins fear the coming blizzards. Mighty autumn begins its reign by disburdening trees Heavy with their many seasoned leaves of various hues. Soon white fluffy flakes of snow will start to precipitate As children shriek and chortle, making snowballs, While others engineer a snowman just for laughs. As father chops the wood prepared for days When cold Winter starts to spread its might. Inside the house mother prepares her famous lunch. The pumpkin soup smells of pure delicacy, Warm thick brown morsels dipped in the warm soup, Ah that spicy essence, a balm to thaw numb extremities. Despite the icicles that form on our windowpanes, The lake can only produce dangerous thin ice. Skating is off limits as notices appear everywhere, A harbinger of doom with skulls and prohibition. Anticipated winter’s wrath shows its might, as landscapes Look threadbare since no flowers bloom, while some swans Fly away to warmer climes, leaving behind them sullen gloom. 3 September 2015

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Date: 9/12/2021 3:36:00 AM
Yeah, winter is right around the corner with its snow and all that you brilliantly mention:)
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Date: 9/7/2021 10:33:00 PM
Your words painted a perfect picture of Autumn and Winter ~ I enjoyed the read Victor. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 9/5/2021 12:08:00 PM
So beautifully written, Victor ... autumn is loved or hated ... autumn started early here this year ... but it has been beautiful ... no rain ... but a clear and crisp air ... and cold evenings :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/5/2021 1:10:00 AM
Autumn has arrived and soon winter will follow... Here in India, in my place, we don't get to see much of autumn or winter... It's monsoon here now... drizzling often and raining... Enjoyed reading dear Victor... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/4/2021 8:24:00 PM
We are on the cusp of autumn, really looking forward to a change in the season...Delice
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Date: 9/4/2021 10:25:00 AM
Loved the read Victor, as Autumn’s breeze bring down the colourful leaves they remind us that winter isn’t far away. The pumpkin soup and warm thick brown morsels sounds wonderful, just what’s needed on a cold wintry day… Hugs, Belle
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Date: 9/4/2021 4:20:00 AM
Winter’s heartache but that awfully good bread and soup! Mmm…
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Date: 9/3/2021 10:47:00 PM
Hi Victor, I enjoyed your ode to the changing seasons. Spring and Autumn are my favorite times of the year. Your descriptions were very good. I could just picture each scene. I never heard of pumpkin soup; you make me want to give it a try. Well done. Have a wonderful evening and weekend, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/3/2021 1:28:00 PM
Autumn and summer are my favorite seasons, though I love spring and winter, too. Each season has their own special charm. You have captured the beauty of changing seasons quite well here, Victor, with your fantastic imagery. Hugs.
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Date: 9/3/2021 12:41:00 PM
Gorgeous poem, Victor! Your imagery and sensory words made me feel like I was right there taking in that scene.
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Date: 9/3/2021 12:28:00 PM
Hello Victor, My fav. season is summer. fall is beautiful with the colorful leaves. I like spring. winter is not my fav,. I rater it be summer all year round. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 9/3/2021 9:21:00 AM
autumn is beautiful in it's changing landscape...i love my summer, but will admit early autumn is so pretty... your poem brings the seasons to life, well done my friend! hugs
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Date: 9/3/2021 7:55:00 AM
Beautiful setting with great imagery , love it.
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Date: 9/3/2021 5:38:00 AM
Enjoyed the journey through your longings for the seasons, Victor. Brilliant images of autumn-- transitioning to winter.
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Date: 9/3/2021 4:51:00 AM
This poem is quite brilliantly written, Victor, and I especially enjoyed the visual representation. The fall is one of my favorite seasons because the surroundings turn beautiful, and the sky starts to display a kaleidoscope of bright colors.
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Date: 9/3/2021 4:39:00 AM
I could see the snowballs and snowmen through your verses... Beautifully penned... I have never seen snowfall ever in my life so I always love to read such poems ... Thanks for sharing...
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Date: 9/3/2021 4:23:00 AM
Love the imagery Victor, I do love the autumn when the landscape changes and gives us spectacular colours. Tom
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