Any Young Place

And there was a beat to it then, you know?
the type you couldn’t place;  and you 
handed in your coat and soul, when 
you stepped into the room

And in the rush to get higher than Eifel, 
cooler than ice, we jumped and ducked
to the sax’s sound and the drum's 
almighty swell, with urgent steady feet; 
a bruising cruising, poetic musing, 
shattered tattoo from hell

and the blustering, crazy, hazy, wild 
hip-hop, jazz-filled headless chicken- 
room, 
bounced  outside over the garbaged, 
twilight, “buddy give a dime,”  neon 
signed, lunar-crooner heaven’s spooner,  
zip-zap smoking  moon,

and the blue-jeaned devil’s, mighty revels
shot the black heart, jump start, bouncing, 
trouncing, blue-veined sweating night.

And there was a beat to it then, you know?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/14/2015 11:55:00 AM
Brilliant, mate!! I understand exactly where you are coming from. My very best regards, Pete!! :) john.
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