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Anxious Breeze - First Place Contest Winner

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"Dead leaves lay still until the wind takes them~here and there: even the last flower is withered: yet there is a beauty in decay. " Quote by _Constance La France Ah, east wind—you trekked afar for fallen foliage. A growing impulse to claim a human life away. Finally soaking it in, you boosted your dosage. Soothing the sting of idleness and recalling decay Tell me, for whom are you persevering to wait? I'll unpack things and sit down once it's too late. Sunny or rainy skies, can love set you elate? Oh, wind, if you're after me, I'll greet you with glee. The roar of the sand yelled forth, wild and free. Clapped hands, all the broad leaves around me Decay is infinite; by using a taciturn tone, no judge I would plant my seeds even if Cosmo died today. Synergy solves queries, but discord swells hate. I often felt decay was as pretty and rich as spree. Written: June 3rd, 2023 1St Place Contest Winner Writing Challenge - D Quotes Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Fragmented Rhyme: created by Constance La France

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Date: 6/19/2023 9:04:00 AM
Such a splendid poem. I have only just read it, and became mezmerised by the way you presented it with beautiful music to play as I read your amazing thoughts put into rhyming words in this masterful poem. Congratulations for its worthy win my friend.
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Date: 6/12/2023 6:15:00 AM
Sotto, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations on your win. And thank you for using my quote as your inspiration and using my created form. I like your image and music too !
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Date: 6/11/2023 10:26:00 PM
Wonderful poem ...Sotto. Congratulations on your top win in the Contest.
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Date: 6/11/2023 9:55:00 PM
Through the seed that disintegrates and decays, a new life emerges. There is beauty in decay too ! You have written a first rate poem on a subject too difficult to handle. Congratulations on your first place win, dear Lasaad !
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Date: 6/11/2023 1:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your "Anxious Breeze" write/picture. Have blessed day/week...........
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Date: 6/4/2023 10:52:00 AM
This poetry is and could only be written b a talented poet, you Lasaad. i am making it a fave, simply beautiful. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/4/2023 9:55:00 AM
'I often felt decay was as pretty and rich as spree' - nice conclusion. Great writing. Good luck i contest.
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Date: 6/4/2023 4:53:00 AM
Rustling in winds--praising beauty of decay-- like the autumns that dazzle us. Best to you my friend.
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Date: 6/4/2023 2:20:00 AM
Excellent poetry Sotto. Our soul will revel in heavenly bliss.
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Date: 6/4/2023 1:21:00 AM
Awesome poetry Sotto, perhaps when we pass away and we decay the anxious breeze takes our soul away, flying on the breeze to heavens shore, isn’t that a wonderful thought… Belle
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