Antiquities On the Brink

the antiquitous souls.
" perhaps uninvitable?"
 mellowing amberred coals
 [portioned minds] , 
   on the brink of unstable?
 Stability became a commidity .
fathoms of time ago.
 drinking from a fountain of 
bereavement.
 They've forgotten of the seeds?
in need, to be sewn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/18/2012 9:34:00 PM
That is a beautiful, powerful poem. I love it! :) Great job!
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Larry Mason
Date: 8/20/2012 3:56:00 PM
thanks hun! i didnt think much of it , but its very deep. i just write to do it.
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