Antiquities On the Brink

the antiquitous souls.
" perhaps uninvitable?"
 mellowing amberred coals
 [portioned minds] , 
   on the brink of unstable?
 Stability became a commidity .
fathoms of time ago.
 drinking from a fountain of 
bereavement.
 They've forgotten of the seeds?
in need, to be sewn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Robillard Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 9:34 PM
That is a beautiful, powerful poem. I love it! :) Great job!
Mason Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 3:56 PM
thanks hun! i didnt think much of it , but its very deep. i just write to do it.
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