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Another Mountaintop - Erotica

(Several here have encouraged me to post some of my erotica, so here's a start) My thoughts fly back to you, and to the facets of your being, beauty, giving, singing, creating of safari to adventure, softness and unique remembering of images too deep within to realize as one until my mind is fused with yours and God's, exulting in a sweet profanity, one hallowed time alone. Close your eyes, and there for us incarnate lust-- your naked body lying over me and thrashing with desire, our mouths inseparable, and I, your ready prey to succulence, may know the heat of glory as your thighs press down upon my own. And what of arms, attending to the precious discipline of nipples, testes, breasts and bellies in their quest of paradise? What of my turgid manhood, burgeoning with every thrust into your seething pelvis now, again, again ! ...and it is not enough. No amazement at the restlessness of our desire. The absolute transcendence of carnality that we are given suffices now; our questing tongues, our probing, hot demand is ruler of the writhing scene that would consume us at the moment that I blast within you all that I may give-- Pure ecstasy is ours, for climbing to the heights , we find that we have reached the summit of Olympus and released the thunder of the gods. ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/14/2012 8:35:00 PM
Well done Dean! Looking forward to reading more : )
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/16/2012 8:39:00 AM
Thank you. Interesting that I should be getting so many comments on this so long after it appears.
Date: 7/14/2012 7:38:00 PM
Ok excellent..precise tactfull..don't think you need the last 5 lines ..it ends with [all that I may give] Light & love
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/16/2012 8:38:00 AM
Thanks, doll. Will think on it.
Date: 7/8/2012 3:05:00 PM
well written erotica, I need a cold shower now! this captivated me from first line to last, very sensual, you really took me there :-) clever title too, connecting nicely with the last four lines...if you get any negative feedback you can blame me for encouraging you haha
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 7/11/2012 5:27:00 AM
I don't need any encouragement lol
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/8/2012 3:34:00 PM
Thanks. Cold showers help, but warm ones with a showermate are better. I'm always grateful for the encouragement. -Dean
Date: 7/7/2012 5:56:00 PM
‡ Wow, She Sounds Sooo Beautiful & You, My Dear Gifted Robert * Never To Miss A Beat In Consuming The Flames Of Her Beauty * As I Afore Did Say & Now Find Even More So This Evidence To Be True * 'Your Naked Body Lying Over Me & Thrashing With Desire.' * Wonderful, Not Only Your Amazing Talent But Also, This Steam Made In Pulsations Perfect Poem Amid Both Love & Profound Wanting; Bravo * My Luv, Rachel ‡
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/7/2012 6:11:00 PM
Thanks, Rachel. I'll have to confess the woman was only in my mind, but she might have been. The thoughts, though, were sincere enough. :-) Not so amazing. -Dean
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