Anita

Into the tunnel we went
In search of danger, black deeds and terrifying mystery
Armed as the Romans for this ghastly adventure
With EMF*, night vision and digital recorders
Prepared to capture in these haunting sepulchers
Disembodied voices, and hair raising caresses.

Dust
Crumbling rock, spider webs
“Aaaaamyyy,” her voice whispered to me
Batteries dying
Her energy rising
Cold it was- freezing
“I want to know you”, I told this ethereal little girl
“Tell me your story.” I asked softly,
Abashed. 

Charged.
The atmosphere changed from a place
Deep, dark, eerie
To a warm sunny day
I saw her swinging from a tire hung on a tree
Happy, golden curls flying as she weaved to and fro
Laughing as a little imp- a true fairy
Then she showed me her dismay
I followed what she showed me
In terror and pure agony

A man,  tall and tenebrous stood behind her
An axe in his hand
Blood- crimson dripping from it’s fierce edge

She never saw him
Her head rolled as he laughed- jubilant from this carnage he wrought
To Anita and her whole family
Her seraphic face froze in a scream that never came

Anita was stuck, in this place between the worlds
Confused, searching…

“Anita”, I told her in a rage of the dark, ominous man
who pillaged her chaste soul-
“Go Sweetheart, he is gone. Do not be afraid anymore.
He cannot hurt you!”

Waiting…the biting chill returned
My EMF read astonishingly high… Still I waited
“Ohhhhh, it is so bright!” Anita sighed.
Waiting…
My EMF began fading
Anita’s rage, anger and confusion began to abate.
Slowly, a mist appeared 
Upward it floated, in it I saw her face
Smiling, peaceful, serene-

She had finally found her way home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/8/2010 12:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win in Danielle's contest, " Time warp." I cried when I read this heart-wrenching poem, Amy. You are a brave heart...trying to rescue Anita from that tall and tenebrous man. I wish you many more wins in the near future. Thanks for your comments on my poetry. Love and admiration, Andrew.
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Date: 4/5/2010 5:37:00 PM
sensational encounter Amy- Congrats
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Date: 4/5/2010 10:32:00 AM
Very scary encounter in that tunnel, Amy. I would have been terrified! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/23/2010 2:46:00 PM
Hey did I misspell something on haggar?
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Date: 3/20/2010 7:34:00 PM
I guess...I prefer paranormal investigator.
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Date: 3/20/2010 7:19:00 PM
ghost buster?
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Date: 3/20/2010 5:53:00 AM
Amy this is a fantastic write - It quite blew me away - Thanks for sharing such a powerful write -:)
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Date: 3/19/2010 6:40:00 PM
soupmail, Amy JB
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Date: 3/19/2010 12:18:00 PM
Well the weekend is upon us and I am trying to get as many poems read as possible today as I will be gone most of the weekend from the Soup. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Amy. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/19/2010 10:24:00 AM
Piognantly powerful Amy....wonderful job! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes! Have a blessed day~Mary~
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Date: 3/19/2010 9:51:00 AM
Great Write Amy. I'm still getting chills. lol Best of luck with the contest and Best Wishes Always, Bill (Soup Mail)
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Date: 3/19/2010 7:49:00 AM
very descriptive...excellent! Yes, I do sleep..LOL..I write before work and after. Some I jot down during the day when they come to me at work. Love this! JB
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