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Angst On the Big Screen

There you go again, you “Cyber Brat”! There is “no such website”? What is that? First you lead me through a wild web maze; I Google, then succumb to your craze. What happens if I hit “delete”? Will my work vanish, incomplete? Or do you wish to cast me aside? I’ll tap “escape” and wash out high tide! Your camera is like a stalker; I cuss it like an inane squawker. If I press “shift,” will the Earth’s poles move? Your choice of labels you could improve. So I’ll “insert” myself into your brain, In a quest to make you more humane. The poor page tires of your “up” and “down” Now the court jester can wear your crown! No more “errors” or lost connections, And I’ll rid those viral infections. Take me back to the old typewriter, Days when the world’s load seemed far lighter. I promise I’ll never eke out a "tweet" When I replace “Word” with a paper sheet. The old “White Out” is still in my desk And it’s never looked more statuesque!
*Written April 1, 2015, for Carol's contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/18/2015 8:41:00 AM
You rock! Congrats!
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Date: 4/16/2015 10:23:00 PM
I especially loved the verses on the brain and the white out!! What a clever poem, dear Carolyn. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/16/2015 4:09:00 PM
This is a great write, Carolyn. You nicely image how most of us feel who weren't born into this era, but had to make the transition! Congrats on your win! Sandra
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Date: 4/16/2015 2:54:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Carolyn:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/15/2015 1:06:00 PM
Excellent expression on modern computer's world. Sometimes old remains gold. 7 indeed. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 4/12/2015 7:12:00 PM
REALLY, REALLY GOOD! Love your entry for this contest. One of the best I have read. A fav!
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Date: 4/4/2015 3:19:00 PM
Excellent write for that contest. I on some days hate the computer but now seem to be tied to it for good or bad. Methinks this entry will place very high. A7 and enjoyed the read..
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Date: 4/4/2015 9:23:00 AM
The passion and emotions are alive in this piece and confront the reader with their frankness and sensibility. Emile. #7
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Date: 4/1/2015 10:38:00 PM
Superb write Carolyn! Sure to do well, super seven for this,, no life without computers these days !
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Date: 4/1/2015 7:17:00 PM
This is fantastic! A 7..from me. Some times I wish we did not have the computer but then again where would Poetry Soup be?
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Date: 4/1/2015 6:11:00 PM
Oh! :) Lovely, Carolyn. I really enjoyed your take on the contest. I loved that you did it in couplets. Wonderful....Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/1/2015 5:49:00 PM
love the humour... and sympathise with the frustrations! good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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