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ANGELS DANCED

ANGELS DANCED In evening gowns, with wispy wings, tenderly they twirled, whilst astral handkerchiefs conjoined them — the diamond disco ball, your first sun. Intricacy of threads unwind. Each angel reaps half to dab their eyes, as your born again between the moon and stars — this day began in a confined space. . . now seraphim commend you. the sewing circle — the silver and golden threads waltzing through fingers 8/28/2019

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Date: 8/29/2019 7:23:00 PM
Fantastic, Kim. I already wrote one and did not really mention dancing. Uggg, I hope that does not count against me.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2019 10:13:00 PM
GL Andrea! Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 8/29/2019 12:38:00 PM
"ach angel reaps half to dab their eyes, as your born again between the moon and stars — " -Wow! Gorgeous imagery!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2019 12:45:00 PM
Thank you so much! <3 Kim
Date: 8/29/2019 8:17:00 AM
Nicely done Kim, beautifully woven take on the theme..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2019 12:44:00 PM
Thank you, John!