Kim Rodrigues Poet Haibun

Angels Danced

ANGELS DANCED

In evening gowns, with wispy wings, tenderly they twirled, whilst astral handkerchiefs conjoined them — the diamond disco ball, your first sun. Intricacy of threads unwind. Each angel reaps half to dab their eyes, as your born again between the moon and stars — this day began in a confined space. . . now seraphim commend you.

the sewing circle —
the silver and golden threads
waltzing through fingers

8/28/2019

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Andrea Dietrich August 29, 2019 at 7:23 PM Fantastic, Kim. I already wrote one and did not really mention dancing. Uggg, I hope that does not count against me. Kim Rodrigues August 30, 2019 at 10:13 PM GL Andrea! Thank you, Andrea!

Caren Krutsinger August 29, 2019 at 12:38 PM "ach angel reaps half to dab their eyes, as your born again between the moon and stars — " -Wow! Gorgeous imagery! Kim Rodrigues August 29, 2019 at 12:45 PM Thank you so much! <3 Kim

John Lawless August 29, 2019 at 8:17 AM Nicely done Kim, beautifully woven take on the theme.. Kim Rodrigues August 29, 2019 at 12:44 PM Thank you, John!