And So I Pictured Peace

…and so I pictured peace


…and so I pictured peace.
the lea of the meadow at sunset
meadowlarks chasing invisible bugs,
unfelt breeze riffling the tall grass,
the halo of summer warmth.

unknown to me a battle raged
within the gentle stillness,
a struggle for balance, for survival,
for continuation of the species,
the struggle to achieve stasis.

…and so I questioned peace
and its aberrant deficiencies.
its state of constant flux,
conflicts over air, water, nutrients,
its need to be delicately tended.

…and so I came to know peace
not as a utopian hammock
but as a vibrant and living meadow
that must abide the necessity of change
while respecting the changes of necessity.

a peace that dances across the riffling grass
honors both the meadowlark and bug
paid homage in the warmth of sunset gold,
a peace that knows the burden of its halo.


2/27/2015
Submitted to – Pick a Subject – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Shadow Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/8/2015 1:24:00 PM
anytime..PD
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Date: 3/6/2015 2:55:00 AM
John, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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John Lawless
Date: 3/6/2015 6:35:00 PM
Thanks Linda for your support.
Date: 3/5/2015 11:58:00 AM
Very deep write John congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 3/6/2015 6:35:00 PM
Thanks Jan as always..
Date: 3/5/2015 7:35:00 AM
You offer much to think about in your poem, John. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra
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John Lawless
Date: 3/6/2015 6:34:00 PM
Thanks Sandra for your kind words.
Date: 3/5/2015 7:00:00 AM
deep and thoughtful pen John congrats on 3rd place hugs
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John Lawless
Date: 3/6/2015 6:34:00 PM
Thanks Shadow for the variation of topics. It made for some interesting poetry.
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