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Analiza, How Our Love End Up This Way

I still like you   for the first time    serious and true. Your charm is    the weapon you still    use with me. Time and time again   the memories we have   still linger in my mind. Though fate make joke with us   and we landed in others arm   my love see you in a distance. I was young and naive   that I lost you in an easy gift   to a lad that has good intention. That's who I am, a looking glass self   I put myself in the shoes of others   sacrificing my own happiness for others. Now, you realized that I was right   in my true feeling, giving chances   for other's benefit for good intentions. You me judge that I am stupid   to give way for other to change for good    leaving me indepensable and weak. I have no choice but to give up   this love I have so big and understandable   believing true love will come back to me. That was the case in the end to find me    in four corners to know the truth    to rectify that love for me once more. But fate really doesn't sided with us    we didn't cross our path and leave no mark    of whereabouts, no connection, no nothing. Until we're on our fifthies    that fate able to find us through some bridges    connecting our path once again. But its too late, we have our own life now    our own family, our new friends and new fans    we ride on different boat going the sea of life. The love we have no closure before end up    heartbreaking but settled, for in the face of all    adversity we once know what true love is.

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Date: 1/4/2025 3:16:00 PM
Hello Hugo, I read this poem as one partner discovered the lack of love for her partner. Much love here. /.Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/5/2025 5:03:00 PM
Hello Hugo, Your welcome. Yes that is a sad situation Hugo. She should let go. After all you have a wife now. You should put your foot down and say something like, " I am a married man and have a family now. " What was in the past, stays in te past" Maybe that would help. Just an idea. Mjuch love here. /Darlene/
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Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 1/4/2025 8:16:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene for your nice observation. Actually, Analiza is my one and only Sweetheart in college. For almost 33 years now we have no formal closure. Until just recently, we meet through Facebook through a former close classmate of ours as a bridge. Though we our own family, new found friends and new colleagues now, our old feelings still keep on coming back. I want closure, but she did not. She said, we just have to keep it that way. It's a long sad love story we had. We graduated college in 1992. Since then, I don't take relationship until 2000 when I met my wife. That's the long and short of it. Thank you Darlene for reading my reply. Love lots here./Hugo.

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