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Anacoluthon Knights

i can never tell you how displeased readers    are by that position    the singular  moment when nothing makes any sense to them at all  but only to a few brilliant pebbles that soar across the night canvas unknown to the dullards of academia   it is the ONLY reason i write;   to express self to those very few who HEAR ME.   the rest are noise and there is no time for wasting one's artistry on rigid brains    and stiff necked human-geese. Then again, my imagination never demands   an audience of understanding but more of an emotional receptivity.    A slumbering shadowy cloud-vignette      seeping from a tormented mind onto    freshly sliced paper cuts.  This is the  color red screaming in a dying ink stroke. :: 07-21-2017 ::

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Date: 8/1/2017 3:07:00 PM
So visceral and out spoken this poem be, Ernest. The non-metered gait of your words moves the intellect of the reader w/careful synchronicity. Your words breath w/poetic freedom. Try to bear w/us poor dullards, please. Be patient ... and as the seminal knowledge group, KRS-1 said: We must learn. You are one-of-a-kind, my poet friend. A gifted pen rests in your hand. Wonderful free-thinker's poetry. Love and best wishes always.
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Ernest Robles
Date: 8/2/2017 5:04:00 AM
Mr. Robinson, I confess that at times my emotions wash over me in ways that I cannot control and the pen has its own mind when in that mind's state. Sir, thank you so kindly for your words and wishing you and yours a wonderful week! ~ E.P. Robles

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