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An Old Clinker Boat in Williamstown

There is a sadness at the sight 
of this wreck of a boat, 
beached on a brick pad,
paralyzed and deprived 
of riding the tides or being swung
on a mooring line by waves
and wind. It sits as a curiosity
to attract a passing eye, 
a ruptured monument to the precincts 
maritime history. With a gaping 
hole and peeling paint 
it is a mere caricature 
stripped of dignity.

On walks I often pass it or sit
nearby as if in silent vigil 
or just to keep it company
for a while. I would like 
to see it given a fate 
more fitting than being an exhibit 
of progressive decay. 
Silly of me perhaps to endow it
with worth and be moved 
to write these words and do honor
to the hands that made it, 
feel a sense of sorrow
as a weathered soul
is sometimes inclined to do
when confronted by such a sight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wolf Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 7:17 PM
I seldom recall a poem where the poignancy was as thick -- like a maple syrup! -- as in this write, Paul. And that's a good thing! Kudos, Gershon
Willason Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 5:15 AM
Such a gracious comment my dear Gershon...my thanks for taking the time to savor this little exploration into the thoughts that sometimes enter the mind....valued. Regards, Pail
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 11:48 AM
Worse part is Paul, it will probably be just left to fall asunder, it’s almost a humiliation for the boat if there is such a thing, and you do give that impression through your poignant words, I’ve seen some of these old boats getting a good lick of paint and some restoration work done, then used as landmarks in some costal towns, they really do appear to have a soul! Cheers David
Willason Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 5:07 AM
I am an incorrigible romantic when it comes to maritime totems, old boats, dilapidated wharves, anything that once wore the smell of salt. Grew up and fed on the history of a port, first job was with a shipping agent. Sad when history is devalued by neglect. Value your comments David.
Rodgers Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 10:49 AM
Dear Paul, I loved how your caring words breathed life into that old clinker boat. It may sit as a curiosity like a ruptured monument to maritime history but you given it life. I, too will keep a silent vigil, hoping for a more dignified fate. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Willason Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 4:57 AM
Many thanks Daniel...I probably display a tinge of sentimentality, but hey, It services a genuine respect for something that took time to make and commanded considerable skill...cheers, Paul
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