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An Indefinite Pause

my world took a nosedive with your words there is an indefinite pause now all i hear is air and movement in the blackness since the catastrophe of your complex sentences, i constructed a cage made of icy tears i created keys that can only be used once i put myself in said cage and placed the keys in the furthest corner my eyes focus on said keys it is then that i imagine you walking back through the door painted blue and blood red i never count down the days i never count down the nights i simply treasure the many memories that we etched in infinity only you can free me from my self made imprisonment until that time comes, i will continue pray that special, particular ascension

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Date: 6/21/2014 10:15:00 PM
Hi Marty, this is such a great, impressive write! The imagery is fantastic - "a cage made of icy tears." I just live it! Bravo!
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