An Afterthought

this is how it is,
scribbled on a midnight script,
one thought is to play -
a hare takes a moonlit leap,
another smells its warm blood.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 3:09 PM
Congrats!! Sara
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 10:51 AM
Congratulations on your win a 7 Blessings eve
Chutani Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 12:04 AM
David, a nice Tanka and with possibilities of multi interpretations- there I agree with Andrea. Congrats. Mohan
Nunez Avatar
March 28, 2015 at 1:36 PM
Congratulations! Kim :)
Allison Avatar
March 28, 2015 at 5:52 AM
many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2015 at 12:46 AM
this one is so interesting. it's one that I am not quite sure I understand completely, but there was just something about it. . . One of those types of poems that just sounds cool. Congrats in my contest.
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