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He writes to me in curly cues painting fractals on pressed paper made of rice. Shreds of simple stalks are beaten to bare the smoothness of his script. We have not known each other long but we have known each other since man first made fire, the poet and his muse. His presentation fascinates with swirls of brush or indian ink he strokes, both deep and long, with pleasant pressure most often. His words though highbrow smack of pent passions, watering palates and earthy scents. The wanting so sweet no reality could fill the expanse, the oceans of prose, the mountains which jut provocatively, daring, inviting, the cleats of man, use pinion and hammer triumphantly upon the bounty of breast, the thigh of night the whimper of dawn. Poet preen for your muse Caress the unsullied parchment whiteness in the hollow of my neck. First Published in Pyrokinection May 2013

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Date: 2/23/2015 5:10:00 PM
Well Debbie I'm a devoted fan of free verse (written well!) And this is rendered very well. I like to think of myself as a fair poet, but don't seem to be able to master Free verse. Sometimes I think it's a feminine genre. I know it wasn't your intent but I sensed something of the sensual in this. (but in a good way of course) A very good write whatever your intent!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 2/23/2015 7:01:00 PM
Oh yes there usually is something sensual in my verses ;) very good!
Date: 2/21/2015 6:17:00 PM
Descriptive and expressive work..Great that you shared your ekphrasis with us..I enjoyed reading ..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 2/21/2015 6:35:00 PM
Thanks Sara! I found the picture today - the verse was not written from the picture-it does fit well though aye?
Date: 2/20/2015 10:35:00 PM
Debbie,a 7 , wonderful discriptive write, the painting is outstanding. Blessings eve
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