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AMBROISAL

~~~~~~ ^_^ ~~~~~~~~ Pellucid crystalline water casts Balmy aestival breath gusts, -felt Gleaming golden daystar mirrored - rusts Salmons plunged, grass hugged, nestled - belt. Unfathomable river flows Lilies dance through the undulation Quiescence, tranquility grows Rendezvous for such meditation. Trees sway rhythmically - bowing Robust cervids drink obscurely - down Birds tweet in bliss, now they're soaring River runs through it, Light is its CROWN. ^^^^^^^^ ********

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/10/2011 2:43:00 PM
Good to see you in the winners circle Jun Jun, with this interesting write.
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Date: 6/10/2011 5:14:00 AM
Jun-Jun this is amazing ,well crafted inspired haiku poem . Food for the gods. Anne
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:41:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win, Jun jun : )
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Date: 6/9/2011 9:19:00 AM
Accept my congratulations on this nice win in the co0ntest, jun-jun
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Date: 6/9/2011 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's "Haiku~Crazy" contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2011 11:16:00 PM
Wow I think I am going to need a dictionary here, junjun -- Very unique haiku you have here- super congrats on your win :D
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Date: 6/8/2011 10:08:00 PM
J.J.V.,! Congratulations!!!! Thank you for the awesome haiku's and supporting my contest. Don't miss out on my next one.. Take care,..p.d.
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Date: 6/8/2011 8:45:00 PM
Congrats jun-jun on your super duper win in the Haiku contest luv..
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Date: 6/8/2011 8:37:00 PM
hi, again, jun jun, and CONGRATULATIONS on your win.
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Date: 6/2/2011 10:31:00 PM
so you like rhyming haiku? You sure love difficult vocabulary words! what is pellucid?
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