Adulterous Tryst Haiku

ADULTEROUS TRYST Mountain fog Descends on betrayal Steals the kiss

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/16/2013 5:58:00 AM

Ahhh!!! Enjoyed this one today..Sara

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 3/17/2013 1:57:00 PM

glad you like it....always a pleasure to have astute readers...

David Williams

Date: 3/15/2013 2:38:00 PM

Vic, this is a great image...David

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 3/17/2013 1:57:00 PM

thanks, David...it is one of MY favorites, too...

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/14/2013 9:00:00 AM

LOVED THIS! It brought the scene sharply to my mind! Great write!

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 3/17/2013 1:59:00 PM

always wonderful to receive feedback! and, especially, that the scene in my mind got onto the paper!