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Adulterous Tryst Haiku 

ADULTEROUS TRYST

                                                   Mountain fog
                                                Descends on betrayal
                                                    Steals the kiss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/16/2013 5:58:00 AM
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Ahhh!!! Enjoyed this one today..Sara
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Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 3/17/2013 1:57:00 PM
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glad you like it....always a pleasure to have astute readers...
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David Williams
Date: 3/15/2013 2:38:00 PM
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Vic, this is a great image...David
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Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 3/17/2013 1:57:00 PM
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thanks, David...it is one of MY favorites, too...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2013 9:00:00 AM
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LOVED THIS! It brought the scene sharply to my mind! Great write!
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Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 3/17/2013 1:59:00 PM
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always wonderful to receive feedback! and, especially, that the scene in my mind got onto the paper!