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A Wish For a New Day

What happened to my boisterous boy, beloved keeper of wild bluebell skies? You grew to be an audacious man, An honest extension of perpetual wilderness shaded blue by a spirited you, but discontent spurred foolish thoughts of tranquility, an internal peace surviving only in the pause between slow breaths of solitude. So, you untied limbs from sky, separated from your flock (watching their graceful formation rise above rueful rainclouds), you plunged below sunken dreams lower than last streams of dusky sun. At what age do young men learn to run? Variegated wings clipped, you slipped into a cool, green valley of seclusion and felt relief in its hollow meditation of muffled morning, nested soft in efflorescence – with fragrant lasses dressed sickly sweet in breezy taffeta dresses, light ruffles, blooming pastel bows. Sans courage or care, you live on and on in your Shangri-La of despair. And you (now impassive yet spewing charms) bow to rugged kings adorned in purple crowns, towering all around your cocoon. False security feeds your fade, as an ink-bottle horizon pours across starry-eyed canvas sky. “You are too far from home, gone too soon!” bellows a vigilant moon. When gravity fails, you chain yourself to comforts of blackest night. Weary hands rub out starlight crayoned in sparkling silver. One day, you will tire, loneliness brewed from too many sheltered views, and on that new day, I will see a vision of a wish come true - a homecoming in baby blues, your wings colored bright, beautiful birds in harmonious flight against a seamless sunset. You, like a jet spanning time, I’ll see in reflective tides, healed wings soaring on high. A new dawn revealed. Written 3/16/17 for New Day Contest

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Date: 4/8/2017 5:43:00 AM
Congrats Rhonda, for your well-deserved first placement in the contest, with this inimitable, awesome piece!! ;-)
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Date: 4/1/2017 7:19:00 PM
This is absolutely mesmerizing--the language, the deep and many levels of meaning . . . WOW! Congrats on your Well-deserved win!! Janice
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Date: 4/1/2017 7:09:00 PM
Beautiful, Rhonda. Your poem wants to be re-read several times, there is so much in it. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/20/2017 12:26:00 AM
Wonderful write ... beautiful message
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Date: 3/17/2017 6:37:00 PM
Beautiful writing, absolutely captivating! Hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 3/17/2017 3:33:00 PM
Touched dear poet, I saw my own life wrapped in the words of this poem, its journey I have lived and yet you captured it without flaw..a parents hopes and dreams with a hopeful return...fav ..good luck
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Date: 3/17/2017 2:46:00 PM
Touched by the beauty of this poem, Rhonda, by the emotions reaching out to heart and soul. The feelings, worries, wishes, longing are so deeply expressed. I pray that you will be able to see that new dawn. #7+ Regards // paul
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Date: 3/17/2017 9:31:00 AM
I love this write, Rhonda, it's so well written! Such beautiful, intricate lines you have penned.. Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 3/17/2017 8:38:00 AM
I think every parent can relate with your lovely and truthful poem dear, Rhoda! For us parents children remain children for as long as we live unfortunately we do not understand that when we are young! An excellent didactic poem. A seven my friend!
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Date: 3/17/2017 4:49:00 AM
I can relate to this beautifully written poem Rhonda. I was very close to my son until he was taken away from me by his biological father at 14 1/2. My life has never been the same since. He is settled down now with a lovely wife of 15 years with a son who is now seven. I hope all your dreams and wishes for your son materialize and wish you many blessings. Your poem is a beautiful painting of what love is all about. 7 ; )
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