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A Vine in Winter

Sleeping, my darling. Laid out, my sweetheart. Cold. Memories of springtime, sappy. Doormat, dormant. Tolerance in the hush of Winter. No hurry to bud. A vine in Winter; Winter is slow. Just how I like it. Nutrients, in a nutshell; the soil spoils me with its richness. I shake and sip through a straw; divine all the royalties, whilst sleeping, dreaming of a verdant summertime. Winter is slow. Just how I like it. Carbohydrate-filled, I don’t need much energy to laze about in the hills, watching flakes melt upon my vines. My time; I am expecting to thrill, when warmed to the gills. A vine in Winter. Just how I like it. I don’t mind this tender time, for in due season, I’ll grow. For now, cryoprotectants let me safely tarry. Tomorrow is a sunny disposition, Annie; the terminus of dreamland.

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Date: 3/5/2025 3:58:00 AM
such a unique rendering of the theme, interesting personification (would've scored higher with me) congrats on your win in the contest :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/5/2025 7:13:00 PM
Thank you for saying that! I appreciate you, Charlotte! Thank you :)
Date: 3/4/2025 3:25:00 AM
'I am expecting to thrill, when warmed to the gills.' beautiful write dear poet. congratulations on your win. cheers!!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/5/2025 7:15:00 PM
So glad you liked that part, Cheers!
Date: 2/18/2025 8:38:00 PM
I love it! You did this with Winter being so lifelike, talking on her own...beautiful writing <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2025 5:03:00 AM
Thank you, Paige! You are so appreciated!
Date: 2/18/2025 8:08:00 PM
'A vine in winter' reminds me of something so strongly, and I can't put my finger on it! Drat! Senioritis strikes again... At any rate, a fine write, Kim!! ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2025 5:05:00 AM
You are so crazy, my friend…lol! Thank you!
Date: 2/18/2025 4:02:00 PM
How cool. Personifying the vines. Much like a bear must enjoy hibernating
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/18/2025 7:24:00 PM
Truly :) Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 2/18/2025 11:52:00 AM
Wonderfully composed, Kim. I like the voice of the vine. Best wishes for the contest. Warm blessings for your winter days or is it daze?
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/18/2025 7:25:00 PM
Blessings to you, Sam! Thank you!
Date: 2/17/2025 11:55:00 PM
Vines love Winter and snow, we laze about in the hills no energy really needed, i will produce such awesome wine., I am expecting to thrill when warmed up to the gills. Great subject, thoughtful lines, creative write. Hugs blessings, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/18/2025 5:07:00 AM
Thank you, Jennifer! Hugs…warm hugs…we need it.
Date: 2/17/2025 10:38:00 PM
Lovely personification. Grapes are harvested in September usually. Winter is for pruning and rest. Great verse. Sorry I;m late but I had computer problems
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/18/2025 5:08:00 AM
No problem, my dear friend. Thank you!
Date: 2/17/2025 8:12:00 PM
Interesting poem and good personification. I enjoyed this poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/18/2025 5:08:00 AM
Thank you, Mike! Nice to see you!
Date: 2/17/2025 4:43:00 PM
I think best wine is from best vine. In winter, it is highly appreciated :-) Have a nice day lovely big poetess ~ AA
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2025 5:13:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Abdullah!

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