A Vine in Winter

Sleeping, my darling. Laid out, my sweetheart. Cold.
Memories of springtime, sappy. Doormat, dormant.
Tolerance in the hush of Winter. No hurry to bud.

A vine in Winter;
Winter is slow.
Just how I like it.

Nutrients, in a nutshell; the soil spoils me with its richness.
I shake and sip through a straw; divine all the royalties,
whilst sleeping, dreaming of a verdant summertime.

Winter is slow.
Just how I like it.

Carbohydrate-filled, I don’t need much energy to laze
about in the hills, watching flakes melt upon my vines.
My time; I am expecting to thrill, when warmed to the gills.

A vine in Winter.
Just how I like it.

I don’t mind this tender time, for in due season, I’ll grow.
For now, cryoprotectants let me safely tarry. Tomorrow
is a sunny disposition, Annie; the terminus of dreamland.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Puddifoot Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 3:58 AM
such a unique rendering of the theme, interesting personification (would've scored higher with me) congrats on your win in the contest :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 7:13 PM
Thank you for saying that! I appreciate you, Charlotte! Thank you :)
mysore Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 3:25 AM
'I am expecting to thrill, when warmed to the gills.' beautiful write dear poet. congratulations on your win. cheers!!!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 7:15 PM
So glad you liked that part, Cheers!
Hind Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 8:38 PM
I love it! You did this with Winter being so lifelike, talking on her own...beautiful writing <3
Rodrigues Avatar
February 19, 2025 at 5:03 AM
Thank you, Paige! You are so appreciated!
Wolf Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 8:08 PM
'A vine in winter' reminds me of something so strongly, and I can't put my finger on it! Drat! Senioritis strikes again... At any rate, a fine write, Kim!! ~ Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
February 19, 2025 at 5:05 AM
You are so crazy, my friend…lol! Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 4:02 PM
How cool. Personifying the vines. Much like a bear must enjoy hibernating
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 7:24 PM
Truly :) Thank you, Andrea!
Kauffman Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 11:52 AM
Wonderfully composed, Kim. I like the voice of the vine. Best wishes for the contest. Warm blessings for your winter days or is it daze?
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 7:25 PM
Blessings to you, Sam! Thank you!
Proxenos Avatar
February 17, 2025 at 11:55 PM
Vines love Winter and snow, we laze about in the hills no energy really needed, i will produce such awesome wine., I am expecting to thrill when warmed up to the gills. Great subject, thoughtful lines, creative write. Hugs blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 5:07 AM
Thank you, Jennifer! Hugs…warm hugs…we need it.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 17, 2025 at 10:38 PM
Lovely personification. Grapes are harvested in September usually. Winter is for pruning and rest. Great verse. Sorry I;m late but I had computer problems
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 5:08 AM
No problem, my dear friend. Thank you!
Bayles Avatar
February 17, 2025 at 8:12 PM
Interesting poem and good personification. I enjoyed this poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 5:08 AM
Thank you, Mike! Nice to see you!
Alhemaidy Avatar
February 17, 2025 at 4:43 PM
I think best wine is from best vine. In winter, it is highly appreciated :-) Have a nice day lovely big poetess ~ AA
Rodrigues Avatar
February 17, 2025 at 5:13 PM
Thank you kindly, Abdullah!
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