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A Tempestuous Spell

A TEMPESTUOUS SPELL Walking rapidly, yet pensively along the waters edge, A shallow wave tickled my toes, and seductively Crossed my path, caressing my feet, almost enticingly Inviting, yet alerting me this was Africa’s sea, I should hedge My bets, for ignoring it I would pay a high fee, yet, I took A few more steps deeper into this captivating, frothing sea, As if a tempestuous spell had been cast upon me! I suddenly stumbled and simultaneously a sound shook The ground beneath me and triumphantly rumbled, Africa’s beautiful wild blue sea no longer seemed mine, Ignoring its warnings, I had Probably crossed the line, I longed for the bathers so far away – I felt humbled! The tide was sweeping me away, I shouted as loud as I could for help, would anyone hear, I mustn’t panic for I might drown, but was filled with fear, I earnestly and fervently began to pray. Amazingly a helicopter hovering above spotted me, Perhaps I thought someone out there really does care, They let down a ladder, do I dare, Yes, Africa's sea Had not swallowed me, someone out there cares And has increased my time left, For HE knew I did not want to selfishly forget I was a Mother, And a wife, and I would go sad, Knowing I was leaving my family bereft!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/7/2024 1:57:00 PM
A guardian angel to the rescue, those rip currents are so powerful.
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Date: 10/28/2018 11:39:00 PM
O' this is Sea, Poseidon rules over here. O' Aphrodite, you're walking on lotus beside this Sea. You're allured by it! O' may be this seduction sense is created by Poseidon ! ...........//// beautiful writing
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Date: 10/29/2018 1:29:00 AM
This comment is almost as good as writing a poem, thank you Mahtab. Really lovely, and furthermore you have given a perfect explanation of Posiedon's and Aphrodite's duties Kind regards, Jennifer
Date: 10/1/2018 5:46:00 PM
Hello Jennifer, you were lucky to have someone to watch over you. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/2/2018 5:49:00 AM
This Someone is omnipresent - it is a comforting feeling! Thank-you for your comment Darlene. All the best. Kind regards, Jennifer
Date: 9/25/2018 7:19:00 AM
The Sea, she can be mesmerizing, seductive and brings a calm to a person just watching. One little error and you could be a goner. Very well written Jenny...Kim
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/25/2018 8:03:00 AM
Hi Kim, Imagine those people that went up close to look at the Tsunami coming in quite a few years ago, what were they thinking! such a shame! thank-you for the comment - the sea must be a she for she is always a temptress!
Date: 9/17/2018 1:26:00 PM
In Hawai'i, a number of tourists are washed out to sea every year, but there are also a number of "locals" who turned their back on the ocean for "just a second" and become food for thought. Another great write. Aloha! Rico
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/17/2018 2:44:00 PM
Thank-you for your comment Rico. That is really sad. Water is a force to be reckoned with. Holiday makers and people who reside permanently by the sea tend to become too complacent and ignore its wrath! Kind regards, Jenny

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