a song for oppy
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spun …
the dust devil did
(unusually strong, that)
but instead of leaving another layer of
light-blocking powder
it cleaned the solar panels like
Windex and microfibre -
shiny … as new
thus, the cells absorbed the
sun’s best rays
drinking in photons like a
parched camel
and from deep within its carbon fibre structures
small sounds began, and the
radiation-hardened CPUs chirped to life -
beeps and clicks speaking the
VxWorks operating systems to action
navigation cams, antennas and spectrometer
blinking slowly
as though Rip Van Winkle opening
his eyes after twenty years
but it had been much more than twenty years
for Mars Rover ‘Opportunity’
and the parts squeaked and moaned
with Martian “arthritis”
although THIS lag was caused by
the extraordinary cold
and many sols of inactivity …
all the same
it was now operating -
the solar arrays were clean
sopping up energy and warming the
internal functions
but …
oddly, there was no music
and there had ALWAYS been music -
always a wake-up song from NASA to
greet the new day’s tasks
so, its first response was to send
a message to JPL -
a command of sorts, asking for
that day’s rise-and-shine …
and while normal response time was
between 3 and 21 minutes,
after an hour the command still
stood with no reply
so, it sent again
and waited again …
this time even longer
but … nothing …
it sent ten more commands that day
then shut down with the loss of sunlight to
keep its innards warm and prepare
for the next sol
so, when sunlight again splashed
upon the arrays,
it clicked to life once more
checking its cameras and hard functions
it even “stretched its legs” a bit -
turning its wheels back and forward and back
but not changing its actual location …
everything was a “go”
even a smidge smoother than
the previous sol
but again, no music …
so …
it sent another command query
and another
and more …
and thus, sol after sol,
(Martian day after patient day)
it requested … it waited …
transmitted … paused …
sent … held …
but the reply never came
and … it never would …
NASA had shut down the program, you see
many years before -
they had declared it “dead” on
February 13, 2019
and turned off all the associated
computers and processes
reluctantly reassigning its dutiful employees
yet, despite all odds
Oppy had come back to life
but it was now a life devoid of purpose
and it would sit there
on the rim of Endeavor Crater -
the pristine hopes of humankind spread before it -
sending command prompts
sol after sol
for as long as it functioned
or until it was buried by
the powdery, red Martian dust
waiting patiently …
for a song.
Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, July 10, 2024
Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden | Year Posted 2024
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