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A Silent Room

As the continuous rain trickles from the roof and the gentle breeze stirs the windchimes to play tunes, a bird warbles chere, chere to a lady friend who answers cheer. The rain is cold and uninviting to humans but birds must ignore such a small inconvenience to love affairs and courtship. Their chirps to each other get closer. One has moved into the Holly Bush about ten feet closer to the one bird in the Pear Tree.
a truck's motor hums in the distance as it speeds... rain 'pon the road sings
The gentle breeze blows cold mist from the rain upon the old lady in the rocker out on the porch. She shivers and writes a few more words in her notebook before retreating into the warm, dry and comfortable home. She thanks God for a few minutes to enjoy the creation and the creator.
the aroma of food cooked for lunch lingers... a silent room

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/19/2014 5:30:00 AM
Well done. That truck could be me.
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Date: 3/30/2014 10:51:00 PM
I love how you did this Sara...and made it feel so inviting....just lovely...
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Date: 3/29/2014 3:05:00 PM
Such wonderful words Sara. I was excited to stop by and thought this to be another jewel. And so appropriate on this rain driven day. Take care Sara.
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Date: 3/29/2014 12:19:00 PM
An uplifting write Sara!
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Date: 3/29/2014 9:20:00 AM
Interesting how you used your same narration from your previous poem but changed the Haiku within it! Even though I love this poem, as you have done excellent with it, I believe that your previous poem was better, it just flowed better! This poem is very awesome though, I do love it! What a grandiose piece my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 3/29/2014 8:45:00 AM
Sara, can feel your pen move across the page in this delightful poem of peaceful observation! Thank you for inviting me into this enchanting scene! Well done! Jimbo
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