A Poet's Penance

She smiled
An ambient temperature smile
At best
A torqued acknowledgement.

The paper shrieked
Eraser burn and frustration
Testing the limits
Of its tortured muse.

Again
Words kissed the atmosphere
Glided on meter
Danced in a rhythmic dream.

Again
She smiled
A tear, a whispered
“I love you”

Embracing her gift
I wondered:
“Would you love me If I wasn’t a poet?”

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Date: 9/13/2023 1:40:00 PM
Thanks for writing and congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 9/6/2023 9:08:00 AM
It seems you found her. She is a very fickle mistress indeed. Some great words my friend.
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Date: 9/1/2023 1:41:00 PM
Quite a love story there, John. Awaiting an encore! Bravo, Gershon
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Date: 9/1/2023 10:16:00 AM
Nicely done John. I like your minimalist word count... true poetry in my world. Few words that speak so many words, e.g., '...the paper shreiked." :)
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Date: 9/1/2023 9:30:00 AM
Great lines John, sadly I'm not a poet just a pooh-et so i wont be entering the contest lol:-)
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Date: 9/1/2023 9:28:00 AM
- A terrific contribution to this contest, John - Best wishes :) - hugs
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