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A November Poppy

A NOVEMBER POPPY Names,familiar names that now remain exposed,carved in stone,a memorial to others' shame.In their prime,cut off a time,so brief,float down,my sweet poppy leaf. Once a face,smiling eyes, lives with dreams vibrant as day,faded now,untold in someone's memory destined to lie.Every name,there were schooled,loved,laughed,and cried,like we,walking this town, exploring field and vale,each unique,and an unfinished tale. An unstructured prose verse dedicated to my grandfather and great uncle. Listen to me recite this verse on youtube today under pen name ichthyschiro

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Date: 11/1/2019 10:56:00 AM
Brian, so beautifully penned and emotional . This touched my heart. Working on something but I am not home. So it is difficult but will write you a beauty in unstructured prose verse.
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/1/2019 11:49:00 AM
Thanks Constance,Plenty of time ,the FTI blog will remain open for your contribution.Enjoy your day
Date: 11/7/2013 2:43:00 PM
I am on my way just now, to listen to you read this remarkable remembrance poem. Beautifully written as a heartfelt tribute to your elders, Brian. So much said in so few lines. Lovely....and sad.
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Date: 11/7/2013 10:15:00 AM
deep remembrances of those who fought for us in a " time so brief.."... beautifully crafted, brian, and reflects the heroism of my dad as well..:) huggs
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