Notes About The Poem

Premiere Contest Winner''A Lost Feather''

 
A feather lost glides, drifting, it soars, In the mighty wind, it twirls and swirls, as if dancing; Once, the People owned all the wilderness, They called it home, now they watch it be destroyed. There, high upon a sheer jagged, rocky cliff, An appaloosa horse of many colors stands majestic; There, under a blazing azure sky above, An Ojibwa girl looks at the beautiful land of Canada. There, in that mighty wind that roars and howls, Eagle feathers in my hair and on my horse gently flutter; There, below the Ottawa River thunders, And the vast lands of wilderness stretch to the horizon. There, above in that cloudless sky canopy, Eagles fly, symbolizing the Peoples spirit and strength; There, in my dream, I am one with my ancestors, The only sound is the wind that moves the fluttering feathers. A feather lost glides, drifting, it soars, In the mighty wind, it twirls and swirls, as if dancing; Once, the People owned all the wilderness, They called it home, now they watch it be destroyed. ____________________________ April 29, 2016 Poetry/Verse/"A Lost Feather" Copyright Protected, ID 16-783-077-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. 4/1/2019, 2019 Poetry Marathon Final Placement Sponsor, Mark Toney Seventh Place _______________________________ Submitted to Marathon, Mile 24 Sponsor, Mark Toney First Place ________________________________ For the contest, A Poem Please sponsor, John Lawless Fourth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Inman Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 10:01 AM
A powerfully poignant write, filled with emotion.
Gauthier Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 7:43 AM
I remember this striking poem that resonates with nobility ~ I'm surprised I had missed FAV'ing it then. Definitely not a poem easily forgotten. A FAVE.
La France Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 4:44 PM
Line, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and the FAV, appreciate _Constance
Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 2:54 PM
Knowing how precious this poem is to you, I am so happy to see it on the list among the top winners, Constance. a much deserved win and Congrats to you. Love your poem, Ojibwa girl.
La France Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 6:26 PM
Andrea, yes this poem is important to me and so happy it managed to get on Mark's winning list, Wiishkobi Ode
Haight Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 9:28 AM
Constance, I was so happy to read this wonderful poem again and to see your high placement in the poetry marathon contest! Sending my heartfelt congratulations to you! Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 6:26 PM
Sandra, thanks so much for the congratulations and a big congrats to you also ~
Gauthier Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 11:43 PM
Congrats on this poignant poem and your high placement in this marathon contest, Constance.
La France Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 7:30 AM
Line, thanks for the congrats and compliment. Wisshkobi Ode
Canerdy Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 8:44 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Constance! Janice
La France Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 7:29 AM
Janice, thanks for the congratulations and compliment ! Wisshkobi Ode
Toney Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 4:34 PM
Constance, after 122 days, 27 contests, and 945 submitted poems, you have won SEVENTH PLACE overall in my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest!!! Kudos to you for your well-deserved win! ~Mark
La France Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 7:28 AM
Mark, thank you for your dedication and for the honor of placing my poem on your winning list, I am honored. Wisshkobi Ode
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 3:03 AM
Superb Constance! Very deserving of your Trophy! Congratulations! Happy St. Patrick's Day! xxoo
La France Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 10:47 PM
Connie, thanks so much for the congratulations,Wiishkobi Ode
Haight Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 11:55 AM
Such a beautiful poem, Constance, and so deserving of your Trophy win! Congratulations on your placement! Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 10:48 PM
Sandra, thanks for the beautiful and congratulations, Wiishkobi Ode ~
Roper Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 11:34 AM
Beautifully done, Dear Heart, great imagery. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs Eve ~`*
La France Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 10:49 PM
Eve, thank you for the beautiful and the congratulations, Wiishkobi Ode ~
Canerdy Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 10:47 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Constance! BEAUTIFUL! Janice
La France Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 10:49 PM
Janice thank you for the congratulations and the compliment Wiishkobi Ode ~
Barden Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 9:39 PM
Wonderful write, Constance, and so worthy of the win ... phrasing, imagery, and I adore anything Native American, (I was part of a petition campaign to create a National Holiday, which fell far short, sadly). Sincere congratulations, my friend! :-) <3
La France Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 10:50 PM
Greg, thank you for the congratulations and the wonderful comment, Wiishkobi Ode ~
Toney Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 9:31 PM
Constance, "A feather lost...", "An appaloosa horse of many colors...", "Eagles fly..." -each stanza is strong and a tribute to the Ojibwa and other native people. A Fav for me. Congratulations on your first-place win on Mile 24 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Only 3 contests to go before the final! ~Mark
La France Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 9:40 AM
Mark, thank you for the contest and my wonderful placement, as you can imagine this poem is very precious to me, thanks for the Fav too, Wiishkobi Ode ~
Hlabisa Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 1:37 AM
Great work. Congrats BW on your placement
La France Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:30 PM
SH, thanks for the compliment and congrats, Wiishkobi Ode ~
Haight Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Very powerful, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your fine placement in this Premier Contest. 7, Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 9:01 AM
Sandra, thanks for visiting my poem with congratulations, Wiishkobi Ode !!!
Flower Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 8:08 AM
Great one BW. Congrats on your top placement. :)
La France Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Moon, thanks for the great and the congrats, Wiishkobi Ode
Lawless Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 12:12 AM
This is a WICKED poem BW. An easy flowing read tinged with the pain of our devastating impact on a land and its people. Thanks for entering the contest
La France Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 9:04 AM
John, thank you for the contest and the placement, I don't write of my ancestors often but I think I should, the Ojibwa are storytellers, Wiishkobi Ode ~
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace