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*Image of Until We Meet Again by MVid. A Heavenly Christmas List An endearing Christmas list too precious to reserve as a blessed season occasions its heartfelt deserve; My older brother was the firstborn, he was well-skilled, seemingly self-born, a cunning net-throwing fisherman, and patient cliff long pole fisherman, a mollusk and seaweed collector, and coastal spearfishing, crab-catcher, avid animal and bird hunter. He was a talented preparer, like our Hawaiian predecessors, millennial's tribal successors, through our ancient cooking procedures, these are the best placed of his features. ~~earned his wings at the age of 19... He was the second oldest brother and a diligent intercessor. He was as constant as the day's star. Harsh mid-life, led to a superstar, as his latter days had grown much more repose than he ever was before. Happy to be his intercessor for a change, once my predecessor I treasured his well-earned enjoyment of life finding his true contentment. ~~earned his wings at the age of 35... Our youngest, the third of three sisters. The last born of the household listers. The particulars of a baby's entitlements, my lords and ladies, are not by the least--embellishments. We shared our lives like the elements, both the youngest and thus checking up on one another. She took the cup-- "bread and honey," as Englishman says, cared for her family, not from 'his', a keepsake endured by each of them, throughout and past her years as their ma'am. ~~earned her wings at the age of 42... My older sister is the second of three sisters, soundest I reckon. She was the most serendipitous, her firm instinct was precipitous, made life phenomenally witty, catching her posing, smiling pretty. Her attraction was apparent and a single lifestyle, knowing she can, a need for herself--a good hubby. A faithful wife, more like a buddy, who together, adopted our niece after our sister rested in peace. ~~earned her wings at the age of 58... My older sister is the oldest of three sisters, she is the boldest. She was the most scholarly of us, a dedicated woman--a plus. One of distinction, first to us, then on to her own family--amen, and then to her career whenever time had benefited endeavor. Lastly, her numerous genuine friends, age together like sparkling wine. ~~earned her wings at the age of 61... Seasons pass to their calendrical latest date outlined once and for all. My Heavenly Christmas list was checked once too, in the sight of my perfect unwrapped mind, my Red-Ribboned heart, and my glowing soul. Made a master-plan, and took the picture of my siblings, with my parents, tears dropping--ripplings. It was an Annual Heavenly Christmas Celebrating Family ~~reserve one. A hui hou kakou 'ohana (meaning; Family glow again). A song in my heart sweetly, as my wings earned, I'll ascend shortly. 2022 December 30 *1st Place* Christmas in Heaven: A focus on loved ones in Heaven at Christmastime ~~BJ Legros Kelley: Judged 2022 December 31 *RZ & HMS.

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/31/2022 9:26:00 PM

A great history of the family "~~earned her wings" - The poem is beautifully ended also. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/31/2022 10:59:00 PM

Many thanks, Christuraj, as my family--waits for me, the last of four bloodlines. Hauoli Maka Hiki Hou 2023 my friend, Aloha William

Ann Peck

Date: 12/31/2022 3:00:00 PM

Dear Hilo, I'm sorry so many have gone. It sounds like a list of my friends. But that's life. They would be honored by the wonderful poem of their lives. Congrats on First Place!

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/31/2022 3:34:00 PM

I'm appreciative, Ann, for your thought-filled expressions and praise, my friend. Hauoli Maka Hiki Hou 2023 to you and your loved ones, Aloha William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/31/2022 8:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write for a beautiful family. Happy New Year 2023................

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/31/2022 9:45:00 AM

Mahalo my dear Paula, and Hauoli Maka Hiki Hou 2023 to you and your loved ones, Aloha William

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/31/2022 6:31:00 AM

Hilo, simply put~~this is a masterpiece in every respect! CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/31/2022 9:43:00 AM

A warming sentiment, Janice, much appreciated my friend--Happy 2023! Aloha William

Mark Koplin

Date: 12/31/2022 6:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Hilo!

Mark Koplin
Date: 12/31/2022 7:29:00 AM

Thanks, I thought it was time for a little change. Happy new year!

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/31/2022 6:16:00 AM

I am grateful for your extended courtesies, Mark, and cheers to your shining new look--Hauoli Maka Hiki Hou 2023 to you and your loved ones my friend! Aloha William

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/31/2022 5:00:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. By God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy of Christmas toward a prosperous New Year along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/31/2022 6:10:00 AM

Blessings and Amen, Beata, and Hauoli Maka Hiki Hou 2023 to you and your loved ones my friend! Aloha William

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 12/31/2022 4:06:00 AM

Congratulations Hilo, your poem is so beautiful and in-depth to so many of your loved ones. This is so honoring to your family. A well-deserved first-place win!

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/31/2022 6:08:00 AM

Heartfelt thanks, BJ, for the opportunity to share a wonder-filled memory of my loved ones. Mahalo my friend, and Hauoli Maka Hiki Hou 2023! Aloha William