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A Gal Who Grew Up In a Barn

Gather round while I spin a yarn
  'bout a young gal, grew up in a barn
With horses and cows, she had her own stall
  She loved taking care of them, most of all

She'd feed the horses and milk every cow
  Nobody ever showed her quite how
She worked so hard, she rubbed her hands raw
  Baling the hay and bundling the straw

Well, year after year she took care of her tasks
  Secretly hoping that someone would ask
Her out on a date or some such like that
  But she was afraid of men and a little bit fat

One summer day the sky turned pitch black
  A tornado was brewing, there was no turning back
It stormed right on in, a-whirling and whooshing, a picture of awe
  All her hay swept away, she clutched at two pieces of straw

She hung on to those straw strands with all of her might
   As they swilled and swirled, and flew up out of sight
The last folks saw of her, she was high up in the sky
  Singin' -- "To heck with horses! I'm a bird; I can fly!"



             September 10, 2020  
     Clutching at Straws Poetry Contest
        Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 9/15/2020 12:50:00 PM
Liked the whole poem. Loved this part " But she was afraid of men and a little bit fat" and ADORED the last line!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/15/2020 5:49:00 PM
OK. Can't argue with you here. (Why should I?! lol). :) gw
Date: 9/11/2020 9:32:00 AM
Delightful tale in poetic form, Gershon! My kind of poetry that tells a story. Bob
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/11/2020 1:41:00 PM
Bob, your comment is music to my ears. Thank you, and here's to a wonderful weekend. Smiles for miles, Gershon
Date: 9/11/2020 6:23:00 AM
I do love birds gw. Even the horsey kind. I really enjoyed this giggle today. Many thanks for the twisty end! laf
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/11/2020 1:40:00 PM
Glad this provided a giggle or two. That's always great to hear. Happy weekend, Linda! :) gw
Date: 9/11/2020 2:15:00 AM
You had me hanging on every word, and I do like a happy ending. Tell us another story Mr Wolf.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/11/2020 1:39:00 PM
Thanks for the positive feedback, Geoffrey. Much appreciated. And I shall try my hand at more of these. Happy Weekend, Gershon
Date: 9/11/2020 2:05:00 AM
I loved this tale. Much better to be a bird that live in a barn. ~~
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/11/2020 1:39:00 PM
Hey, thanks for the perceptive comment, Victor. Hadn't thought of that angle. ~ Watch the Birdie, Gershon

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