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" Ike and Jane "- sequence 2

The name's Ike. Some a ya might a met me before, in my very first write, and knew me as the stalker with the walker. "Retired Romance" was the name, Spoke about meetin' my wife, She's here with me, name is Jane. I likes ta call her the Mrs., cause I never thought that would happen again. Now she like ta near smother me with kisses, but gives me room ta write now and then. We had us one of them honeymoons, she says it ain't over yet. But dang, if'n it ain't over soon, we'll have ta call me in a vet! Ennyways, I wanted ta give y'all a heads up that I'll be a writin' from time to time . We'd like ta thank y'all for the nice thumbs up, 'bout our first little Retired Romance rhyme, and let y'all know that me and the Mrs. .. well.. . ..we doin' just fine ! . "Nite nite darlin."

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Date: 11/6/2011 9:07:00 AM
Congrats robert on your featured poem. Vince
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Date: 11/1/2011 8:55:00 PM
Congrats on featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful write to share with luv..
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Date: 11/1/2011 2:34:00 PM
Golly whiskers, Robert, you done got it made. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 10/31/2011 1:25:00 PM
Congratulations Robert on your well deserving poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/30/2011 1:47:00 PM
ROBERT, Congratulations on your featured poem of the week.. take care and have yourself a safe and fun Halloween week,..p.d.
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Date: 1/25/2010 5:01:00 PM
Dear Robert, Great Series YOU are extremely Talented with the PEN ALWAYS YOURS...HG SOUP MAIL CALL
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Date: 1/9/2010 11:22:00 AM
Great job Robert. You have me smiling again with this one. I love Ike and Jane!! Cute and witty!! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Your kind comments and words of encouragement are very much appreciated! Have a stupendous day~Mary
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Date: 1/7/2010 8:51:00 PM
oops, just saw I already had you on my fav list. So I will do fav poem then. hahaha
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Date: 12/26/2009 3:57:00 PM
Terrific! Keep it up,'ve got a great talent for expressive poetry.
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Date: 12/24/2009 4:28:00 AM
Love it, I like Ike and Jane already...Wonderful piece my friend...Well done...God Bless ...Taz
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Date: 12/1/2009 7:49:00 PM
This is so unique and humourous ...I love it...Marty
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Date: 11/26/2009 11:42:00 AM
interesting choice of wordplay loving it :) and thank you for the comment- Jason
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Date: 11/26/2009 12:02:00 AM
Nice one Robert.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome omments & kind words today.
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Date: 11/25/2009 4:46:00 PM
hi Robert i love the flow and the lighthearted banter, it's fun and easy flowing, take care Dnyce
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Date: 11/25/2009 9:56:00 AM
oh yeah, i remember you. you cracked me up. john
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Date: 11/24/2009 9:21:00 PM
This Poem Is So Precious ! ... Loved It From Beginning To End ... It Was Crisp and Heartfelt... MoonBee
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Date: 11/24/2009 7:06:00 PM
very cute.thanx for the comments.
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Date: 11/24/2009 6:46:00 PM
enjoyed reading today, very cute!! I wish you all the best too!!
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Date: 11/24/2009 6:08:00 PM
Robert - Glad to hear that you all are doing fine - really enjoyed this poem - your love shines like a beautiful light - God Bless, mj
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