Our Soul

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08/10/25

  Line of Inquiry :  ' The essence in us in the same as the essence in the Sun.'

           Soul is dweller of our heart 
          Feel the ecstasy and essence.
          Supreme soul to make me alert
          just assuring its existence.

         In birth-death-after life, soul shines.
         Soul is dweller of our heart.
         Staying in heart, soul to brighten 
          our path, never  leaving apart.
   
        Soul holds the power to exert
        in trouble, grief or any need.
        Soul is dweller of our heart.
        Soul entwines me : It's fact, indeed.

       Similar to essence of Sun :
        Essence of the soul to impart.
        Energy of soul sure to run -
       Soul,zz is dweller of our heart.

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Rowena Velasco

Date: 8/13/2025 5:15:00 AM

I like how your poem keeps returning to “soul is dweller of our heart”—it really sticks. The sun imagery and energy lines make it feel alive and uplifting.