Get Your Premium Membership

Daisy

Rapturous petals always reflect the immortal,fiery light. The impregnable,potent snowstorm abides in the passing rainbow. The symphonic melody of the past blooms like a delightful creek. . Every step in this tough, rocky road is watered by agonizing tears. It enfolds the undying, unrelenting sun. Its solace is a sublime, wandering grace of the dark rill. Unraveling the tapestry of zeal is released an unwavering truth crossing the labyrinthine heart. The light of diamond transcends unswerving,towering cliffs. Our beloved ,enduring daisy,even the wise star bows to your innocence,grace and beauty.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/30/2024 10:57:00 AM
Dear Mulu, I was captivated by the rich, thought-provoking beauty of your imagery. Such a splendid poetic piece and the last five lines a grand finale compelling me to linger over your amazing verse. Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Login to Reply
Magdalinos Avatar
Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 5/1/2024 1:09:00 AM
Hello Susan.Thank you for your kind words. Congratulations on your first place in Brain's contest. Kindest regards ,Mulu.
Date: 4/2/2024 11:48:00 AM
Hello Mulu, the daisy is a beautiful flower. It makes a bouquet of other flowers brighter. I like all daisies . A beautiful poem. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/2/2024 3:29:00 PM
Enjoy your evening Mulu. Darlene/
Magdalinos Avatar
Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 4/2/2024 2:19:00 PM
Hello Darlene,thank you.Have a blessed afternoon.
Date: 4/2/2024 3:08:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing. Petals of daisy so delicate and white unless they are Gerber daisies then they can be different colors, but those white petals remind me of a wedding or springtime romance. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K
Login to Reply
Magdalinos Avatar
Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 4/2/2024 9:12:00 AM
Thank you,Sara.Have a blessed day.
Date: 3/24/2024 8:20:00 PM
Wow. This is fantastic. Pretty imagery and great punctuation. I really love how you did the ending.
Login to Reply
Magdalinos Avatar
Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 3/25/2024 7:48:00 PM
Dear Andrea,thank you. Andrea Blessing.
Date: 3/21/2024 12:07:00 AM
The delicate beauty of the timeless daisy is elegantly recreated in these lovely lines, Mulu. Thank you for sharing. :)
Login to Reply
Magdalinos Avatar
Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 3/25/2024 7:50:00 PM
Dear Evelyn ,thank you,Evelyn Blessing.

Book: Shattered Sighs