4pm

Then I got stuck in my loneliness, 
And it’s four in the afternoon, 
It just feels like my life is but only a cracked beer bottle.
It once held stories that people wanted but 
they drank me
up until they vomited,
And cracked me open on a pavement. 

- Now they do not want to touch glass shards

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/16/2018 6:21:00 PM
Down time then ain't it? LOL...nice work.
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Date: 4/25/2018 8:10:00 PM
Yes, powerful
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