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16 and Keen

inside to - dive roll punch fall kick leg cramp! damn 60's

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Probir Gupta

Date: 7/7/2018 12:57:00 AM

Poems are arising from the very cramp ! ... small but nice ... Thanks for liking my Rejoicing Past ...

Virginia Waters
Date: 7/7/2018 2:18:00 AM

thanks and welcome!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2018 1:09:00 PM

I'm with ya on the leg cramps. I was sitting on a luxury movie seat the other day and at the very end of the movie, I looked like an idiot just staying on my seat waiting for a cramp on the side of my thigh to go away (five min. waiting. Good grief)

Virginia Waters
Date: 7/6/2018 4:06:00 PM

that's a long time alright. but just think of trying to make an old body learn how to do the splits, when never attempted = haha - I give the young stunties a lot of amusement or maybe its horror - but so much fun for someone easily bored - I am actually motivated to do something other than work and it feels GREAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2018 1:08:00 PM

For me, I was nearly 16 in the 60's (1960's) and I had leg cramps in those days just as much as now, so I was taking it as someone 16 years old (from the title line)!! But from below comments I see only one other person took it that way. Sorry about that. It was the dive and roll references making me think of my rock and roll days!!

Virginia Waters
Date: 7/6/2018 4:02:00 PM

nope - it's about my stunt training. Which is not anything one expects from an oldie. Check out my poem entitled - To be too Late. Gives a bit more detail. But I am ecstatically enthusiastic as it has fixed a severe injury no therapists ever were able to. However, not to encourage others to do same as I already had high fitness and muscle level from physical work all life.

Charles Messina

Date: 7/5/2018 5:12:00 PM

LOL , Virginia...one more year to go for me...But I feel what your saying...Love this! All the best...Charlie

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/5/2018 10:42:00 AM

I'm right there with you, Virginia, from the third line on ... LOL ... Best wishes, Gershon

Virginia Waters
Date: 7/5/2018 4:48:00 PM

yeah, my crazy started late. should qualify that - my physical crazy that would be!

Mick Talbot

Date: 6/24/2018 6:52:00 AM

lol, loved the 60's, 2 and a half years in Malta, the remainder, up to 69 in Germany, well the majority, as from there I got to visit the majority of European countries, Norway my favourite, along with Malta.

Virginia Waters
Date: 6/24/2018 10:24:00 PM

umm this doesn't refer to the 1960's. lol

Lyric Man

Date: 6/23/2018 11:02:00 PM

Ok, that was genius on display!!

Virginia Waters
Date: 6/23/2018 11:24:00 PM

Hey enough thank you - don't want head cramps too!