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120 Words - Life

LIFE ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the love of my life, life, its depth, its range, how rife. from high up in the air, to here and there, to where life finds a niche, takes hold! from small, to big and bold! long to tall, thin like thread, take care where you might tread! life not seen on the ground, look hard, it can be found. you might need a gem loop to stoop you must, to scoop, a gem of life so small no lens, not seen at all a wasp less than a mill so cool what a great thrill life, large, so big, so huge no tree, no whale, do muse a fun guy ate with meat in soup, like life, a treat! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
2/6/18 Entered in '120 words' - Poetry Contest sponsored by Silent One Point of interest: Fun guy, fungi, personified! For those who don't know: A species of fungi found in the forests of North America can exceed 6 kilometres in diameter, but less than a mil at its thinnest and not much over at its thickest. It is the true fungi. Mushrooms, toadstools, are its fruiting bodies. Hyphal being their root-like structure, which produces their fruit. One other interesting point is that they are considered scientifically, to be closer to animals than plants, what say the Veegans?

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Date: 2/14/2018 5:32:00 PM
Great job, Mick.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/14/2018 8:39:00 PM
Thank you Normie, appreciated... Best wishes... Mick
Date: 2/11/2018 8:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning write, Mick, enjoyed reading,,, it's not easy to use one syllable words and even harder with a rhyme to make a have way good poem .. Hugs Eve
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/14/2018 8:38:00 PM
Eve, Thank you on both counts... hugs... Mick
Date: 2/10/2018 10:39:00 AM
An awesome and compelling write about life Mick. Life is everywhere as you so eloquently and enticingly expressed. Congratulations on your excellent win my friend! Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/10/2018 1:57:00 PM
Susan, Most grateful, thank you... Mick
Date: 2/10/2018 10:17:00 AM
Hi Mick, This is such a well written piec. Thanks your notes they were educational. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/10/2018 1:55:00 PM
Alexis, Thank you, so happy you found my note helpful too... Mick
Date: 2/10/2018 10:15:00 AM
I think you are a fun guy, Mick. Congrats on your win.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/10/2018 1:54:00 PM
Line, Thank you, and putting a smile on anyone's face puts a smile on mine... Mick
Date: 2/10/2018 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations Mick. Regards Tom
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/10/2018 1:51:00 PM
Tom, Many thanks... Mick
Date: 2/10/2018 9:20:00 AM
Great choice for the contest Mick.. Congratualtions on your placement in the contest
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/10/2018 1:51:00 PM
Silent, Many thanks, keep em coming... Mick

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