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27.11.2023
Anne-Lise Andresen
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                                          Electrifying chords,
                                       searching tones of love
                                     with overflowing devotion
                                           Fate was present
                                          created vibrations
                                  Double footprints in the snow
                                          Winter explosion in
                                            the crystal vase
                                        powdered, ivory roses

                                          He stole my breath
                                        when our lips collided
                                           without hesitation
                                            Looking at him – 
                                      through frozen eye lashes
                                          Out of control from
                                          a thousand shivers
                                          just a few seconds

                                              Is it possible 
                                        to open up all the locks
                                            where uncounted
                                            of white snowflakes
                                                 are stored
                                         Ready to sing a sonata 
                                      without a particular reason

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/29/2023 8:55:00 AM

Double footprints in the snow Winter explosion in the crystal vase…very nice, dear poet!

Frederic Parker

Date: 11/28/2023 4:16:00 PM

as a poet who writes romantic poetry, this one touched my heart dear poet

Eve Roper

Date: 11/28/2023 8:32:00 AM

the imagery of snow through foot prints in the snow , a kiss and frozen eyelashes, stunning sonata ready to sing... Lovely write.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/28/2023 7:05:00 AM

Wow this is absolutely gorgeous, how soul warming can a winter sonata sound youve shown that through your descriptive imagery and depth of emotions woven here in such creative manner. Eloquent write this is and i love ivory roses and the opening lines here too stood out for me. Picture goes so well with your word weaving, goodluck in the contest dear anne lise

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 11/28/2023 5:54:00 AM

The warmth of love can shield you from the harshness of winter. A wonderfully romantic poem my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2023 12:48:00 PM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Jerry :) - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 11/28/2023 5:34:00 AM

A beautiful, romantic sonata, Dear Anne-Lise! I always enjoy the he uniqueness of your poems. hugs ~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2023 12:19:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comment :) - I really appreciate your kind comment, Mala :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/28/2023 5:11:00 AM

Beautiful, romantic. Much enjoyed the vibes of your poem, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2023 12:13:00 PM

- Vijay, many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 11/27/2023 8:18:00 PM

Beautifully lovely! Have wonderful winter days & nights ~ AA

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2023 12:12:00 PM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Abdullah :) - hugs

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/27/2023 4:57:00 PM

A beauty, Anne. Lucky fellow:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2023 12:10:00 PM

- Many thanks Daniel, for your lovely comment ... appreciate it very much :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/27/2023 4:54:00 PM

A very romantic if not chilly romantic verse Anne-Lise, huddling together will keep them warm. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2023 3:13:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Tom :) - I really appreciate your kind comment :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 11/27/2023 1:36:00 PM

Simply splendid. The warmth of your heartfelt words, melt ones heart as the chill of winter is depicted so clearly in this frosty sonata. A beautiful piece Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 4:15:00 PM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, S.V :) - Nice to see you :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/27/2023 1:17:00 PM

Anne-Lise, your poetic creation exudes a tender and exquisite essence, adorned with a captivating choice of vocabulary. The profound beauty of your final stanza further enhances the overall artistry of your poem. Best wishes

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2023 4:13:00 PM

- Winter is cold ... hearts need warmth, Las :) - Many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs