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The flashes of light shine trembling - then gone His feet without shoes are tired and swollen Wonderful event with new eyes, surprised The flashes of light shine trembling - then gone Small fairies who danced - then I realized, the ancient prophetic dreams were stolen The flashes of light shine trembling - then gone His feet without shoes are tired and swollen 28.10.2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Pick-A-Title, Vol 2 - Triolet - Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh Honorable Mention

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2020 6:35:00 PM

really good and imaginative triolet writing, sunshine. Congratulations.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2020 7:52:00 AM

- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 11/13/2020 2:20:00 PM

An excellent take on this Ignis Fatuus prompt, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on a most worthy showing! Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2020 7:52:00 AM

- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 11/13/2020 11:56:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful triolet, Anne-Lise:-)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/13/2020 12:06:00 PM

No way! You did a great job for a first timer, Anne-Lise:-) I hope this win inspires you to write more triolets!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/13/2020 11:59:00 AM

- Thank you very much for my place on your winning list ... it was my first triolet, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/13/2020 7:15:00 AM

This is lovely, Anne-Lise! CONGRATS. Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/13/2020 7:16:00 AM

- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/13/2020 5:31:00 AM

Congrats on your win Anne-Lise, with this fine poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/13/2020 5:38:00 AM

- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/12/2020 5:52:00 PM

Congratulations on the win Anne-Lise! Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/13/2020 4:16:00 AM

- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Linda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/12/2020 3:23:00 PM

Hi Ann-Lise, Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/13/2020 4:15:00 AM

- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 11/12/2020 2:19:00 PM

I'm back here, Anne-Lise, to congratulate on your win!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/13/2020 4:15:00 AM

- Thank you very much for congratulations, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 10/29/2020 7:24:00 PM

Whispers in your piece enrich its mystery!! A good one for the contest, Anne-Lise!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2020 3:07:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comments ... really appreciate the support, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne

Date: 10/29/2020 1:19:00 PM

oh, i love this one

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2020 3:06:00 AM

- Thank you very much, glad you liked it Jack :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/29/2020 7:44:00 AM

Lovely, Anne-Lise! Fixated on those feet, the storm!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2020 3:05:00 AM

- It was stormy to complete this poem, Kim .... :))) - I rewrite it four times :))) - I am grateful for your words and support, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/29/2020 5:40:00 AM

Very nicely penned Ann, GL in the contest.. hugs... soupmail

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2020 2:59:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/29/2020 3:01:00 AM

It reads nicely to me, I hope it brings you success , and love of a a smile, xo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2020 2:59:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/28/2020 8:27:00 PM

Yours is a beautifully written triolet, Anne-Lise. It's mysterious, like the wind, and brings to mind Halloween night. A great picture, too. hugs, Evelyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2020 2:13:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comments ... really appreciate the support, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/28/2020 10:03:00 AM

such a haunting quality to your lines Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2020 11:39:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Jan ... really appreciate the support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/28/2020 7:52:00 AM

Ahhh!! Good one. I enjoyed reading it today. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2020 11:38:00 AM

- Really appreciate your support, Sara :) - Many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/28/2020 7:17:00 AM

Such a beautiful verse. I love it. It's a sure winner :) God bless you

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2020 9:08:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Regina ... really appreciate your support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2020 7:11:00 AM

I really like the mystery of it, Sunshine. I think line 5 has to rhyme with the last line. Other than that, it looks like you did great with it! oh, and line 3 I think rhymes with line one.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2020 7:35:00 AM

- ... and .... Andrea !!! ... :))) ... "Other than that" ... you confuse me ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/28/2020 7:10:00 AM

The dark night brings its fear. You did well with the triolet ~~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2020 9:07:00 AM

- Victor, many thanks for visiting and your comments ... I really appreciate the support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 10/28/2020 6:45:00 AM

This is deep and a little haunting to me... You did this triolet very well my friend..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2020 9:06:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comments ... really appreciate the support, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)