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13.08.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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                                     imbue the stillness
                                    dimensional collisions -
                                        restless state of mind

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Bill Baker

Date: 8/15/2023 11:07:00 AM

Photo made the Haiku, expressive. I liked it! Bill

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2023 11:22:00 AM

- First storm in the first week of August ... unusually early even in Norway ... thank you, Bill :) - hugs

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/15/2023 12:26:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2023 9:41:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Arthur :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/13/2023 2:29:00 PM

Ann-Lise, your haiku is truly awe-inspiring. It is a profound piece of writing that encapsulates a profound image in just a few carefully chosen words.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2023 9:41:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Las :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/13/2023 12:47:00 PM

A powerful write in a few words with a powerful picture. Have a great day/week.............

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2023 9:41:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 8/13/2023 11:35:00 AM

Hi, Ann-Lise, congratulations on inspirational haiku,

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2023 9:40:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Jay :) - hugs