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- Don'T Get Stuck -

                                        heart's truest calling
                                      not be dictated by past -
                                        memory stays fresh

                                         with fervent desire
                                  rider on a moonbeam dream -
                                         to vocalise dreams

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2023

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Joanna Daniel Date: 8/16/2023 7:31:00 PM Lovely dreamy senryus, Anne-lise:) Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 8/16/2023 4:40:00 AM Love it. God bless you my friend. Love to you, Gina Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2023 6:05:00 AM - Thank you very much for your comment, Gina :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 8/16/2023 12:07:00 AM Dreams can be so volatile and so fragile, we need to protect them, love this Anne xo Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2023 2:04:00 AM - True, Vie Rose :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Yann Rolland Date: 8/15/2023 5:56:00 PM wonderful haikus, perfect and thoughtful, thank you so much Anne Lise Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2023 2:04:00 AM - Senryu, Yann :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/15/2023 2:40:00 PM Creative and imaginative work you have penned in this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2023 2:03:00 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Sara :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/15/2023 12:17:00 PM A wonderful/fun ~ write/picture. I enjoyed this magical one. "Good Luck" Hugs...Have a great day............. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/15/2023 12:44:00 PM - This is not a contest poem, Paula ... glad you liked it ... many thanks ... appreciate your comment :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/15/2023 11:43:00 AM Your poem is enchanting, Anne-Lise, as is the picture! hugs ;) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/15/2023 11:49:00 AM - Many thanks Evelyn, for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Sotto Poet Date: 8/15/2023 11:09:00 AM I am consistently astounded by the ability to convey substantial meaning through concise language, Anne. Your selection of both the photo and the wording employed was truly distinctive. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/15/2023 11:20:00 AM - You know I rarely write long poems, Las ... short poems "are me" ... my teacher always said "explain yourself briefly" :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Bill Baker Date: 8/15/2023 11:05:00 AM Loved your choice of adjectives, Anne-Lise. Your choice of photo was unique, a whole different look at Cinderella. LOL Smiles ~ Blessings my friend. Bill Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/15/2023 11:12:00 AM - ... anything ... can happen in dreams ... a place where elephants can fly ... thank you very much for your comment, Bill :) - hugs

Ink Empress Date: 8/15/2023 10:48:00 AM Rider on a moonbeam dream. I love that. Always amazes me how so much can be said in few words. “ memory stays fresh” that line is soul stirring. Impeccable write Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/15/2023 11:14:00 AM - I like to write short poems ... "long A 4 poems" ... are boring to read :) - Thank you so much, appreciate your comment, Ink :) - hugs