---Dancing Tongues

dancing tongues pooling in caverns of delight... waters flow

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:37:00 PM

wow.... romantic...pd

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/17/2011 2:49:00 PM

omg you are always up to something completely different and consistently awesome. and thank you Debbie gal. ok, will do, you found me! xoxoxo

James Fraser

Date: 3/8/2011 5:20:00 AM

Drooling incessantly now, I love it Debbie....:) smiles

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 10:35:00 AM

line changed.. can u go read again please.. appreciate luv..

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 3/5/2011 1:57:00 PM

nice,really like.Thanks for your comment on my poem,yes,I am sorta a rookie,and could use good pointers to improve.Thanks again,I'll be working on it.sincerely,Kacey

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/5/2011 12:43:00 PM

Soup mail!!!!!!

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/5/2011 8:05:00 AM

Beautiful haiku, Deb. Enjoyed. Excellent piece. xxxRalph

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/5/2011 7:53:00 AM

WOW, now this a good wake up poem.. short and sweet my dear Poet...luv Michael