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Sexy Blow Up Doll

Sexy Blow up Doll
                                 One kiss and she blew away
                                    Went up with a whoosh





                                        © Copyright KC.Leake
                                              29th April 2015
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Julia Ward

Date: 9/22/2015 3:23:00 AM

It's good, but you need to call it a senryu, as it is not serious. Julia, with my best wishes.

Kevin Leake
Date: 9/22/2015 10:59:00 AM

Thanks Julia, Will look into that, damn I thought I had it right too!!! Thanks for the read and comment Best Wishes Kevin

Skat A

Date: 9/11/2015 8:11:00 AM

Lol, must it been a light on the knees ... Skat

Kevin Leake
Date: 9/11/2015 11:55:00 AM

Glad you saw the funny side of this Skat, Thanks for the read and comment. Kevin