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1856

During a bad storm one night I turned on my television
Grey and black flickering lines appeared, obscuring my vision
I went outside and saw the aerial had bent over but it would have to wait
Tomorrow I'd get up on the roof and try and put it straight.

Next day the storm had passed, and I put my ladders against the wall
And as I started to climb my wife said " Take care and don't fall"
"No worries darling " I said , "I've done this many times before"
When I was on the roof my pliers fell from my hand and I quietly swore.

I moved slowly toward the ladders and leant my leg across
And then felt my leg go as I slipped on some wet moss
Suddenly, it went black and quiet and there wasn't a sound
In a second, I'd fallen ten feet and landed on my back on the ground.

Next thing I knew I was walking down a street that I didn't know
Then caught sight of my reflection in a tailor's shop window
I noticed I was wearing a flat cap, a waistcoat, and boots on my feet
And the sounds of coaches and horses up and down the street.

Strangers passing me on the street said "A very good day to you sir"
A few people seemed to recognise me and addressed me as doctor
I thought where is this strange place? , I've never been here before
As I got to the end of the street I stopped at a house with a red door.

Something within me told me look in my pocket for my house key
And as I inserted the key and opened it a woman stood before me
Then two little girls in long dresses ran towards me shouting "Papa"
For some strange unknown reason, I knew I was in the Victorian era.

We all went into what was a large dining room and we sat down
Then a maid appeared with a joint of beef from the market in town
The lady who it seemed was my wife then asked me how was my day?
I looked at her very strangely; and I just didn't know what to say.

Then I said "Yes, it was busy, I had cases of scabies and gout
Poor living standards are the cause, there's a lot of it about"
Also, lots of men with missing limbs are returning from Crimea
It angers me to see that people don't care and have no idea".

"Oh dear" said my wife "People believe what they read in the newspaper
I read that many men thought they were going on an adventure"
We finished our meal and my young daughters wanted to play
One said "Papa, can we go on the swing" I said "Okay, lead the way".

The next day I retraced my steps, and headed for my surgery
But I was getting flash backs of another time, was I losing my sanity?
I noticed the calendar in my surgery said May, eighteen fifty-six
Maybe I was working too hard, and my mind was playing tricks.

Days became weeks and then months and soon a year had gone by
But I was still getting flashbacks and I couldn't understand why
Every evening, I returned home, my wife and daughters would greet me
And when my daughters went to bed, I'd read them a bedtime story.

One Friday I'd been working late and outside it was now a dark night
A dense fog hung low that was illuminated yellow, by the glow of gaslight
I made for home down the long-deserted street, but I had a feeling of dread
It was eerily quiet then someone hit me, on the back of my head.

There was a bright flash, then it went dark and I opened my eyes
And then what happened next took me completely by surprise
Two men in green paramedic's uniforms asked me if I was feeling all right
It was a bright sunny day and no longer was it a dark foggy night.

Then my wife leaned over me and I could see she'd been crying
She said she'd feared the worst and thought that I was dying
"How long was I unconscious for" ? I asked her, I had to know
She held my hand and answered, "About half an hour or so".

They lifted me carefully onto a stretcher and placed me in the ambulance
Then for a short time I lay motionless and went into a trance
I was drifting from my present surroundings to my Victorian life
And for a moment I saw my two young daughters and my other wife.

We arrived at the hospital and my injuries were quite severe
The doctor told me I'd need to rest my back for about a year
I got thinking about my experience of that time long ago
Had I entered a parallel world or was it a coma, I don't think I'll ever know.


Written on 15th April 2024

Copyright © Tom Cunningham | Year Posted 2024

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Date: 4/23/2024 9:12:00 AM

Such great fantasy my friend Tom, if it entails having to rest my back for a year, don't think I would climb up to fix an aerial, however, who knows where my sub-consciousness would take me if I was un-conscious due to a fall, perhaps it would lead me back to the Crucifixion of Christ, I would return to this century and take the British army back with me to safe HIM, but then again, I can't change history or the beginning of Christianity. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 4/21/2024 3:54:00 AM

Great story telling in this poem!
Date: 4/19/2024 12:07:00 PM

Such a great story, Tom! I enjoyed every minute of it…
Date: 4/18/2024 6:52:00 AM

Hello Tom, what a haunting journey through time and consciousness, blurring the lines between reality and the surreal. As I delved into each stanza, I felt myself drawn into the protagonist's enigmatic experience, questioning the nature of existence itself. I loved how the imagery transported me to another era, where echoes of the past intertwined with the present. Your words lingered long after I finished reading, leaving me pondering the mysteries of the human mind and the fabric of time. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 4/18/2024 4:45:00 AM

The mind took a journey to another time and place, as time warps from the present to the past, Great story Tom
Date: 4/17/2024 5:16:00 PM

Found myself wondering whether you’d stay there or come home… David K would wonder how we know which is which… and he’d have a point. Thoroughly enjoyed, Tom. Terry
Date: 4/17/2024 9:04:00 AM

This reminded me that you had back surgery a while back. How are you doing from that? Did the ideas for this work come from your experience with spinal surgery? Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Date: 4/17/2024 5:21:00 AM

This held me breathless.... ! I didn't know if I too was passing through a strange state of mind. You are so imaginative and your story telling ability is so wonderful, dear Tom. Your wife's warning, you didn't take seriously. Men are like that. My husband never cares to take into heed my warnings when he attempts at some adventure at this advanced age. You were young when you climbed up to set the aerial right. Enjoyed this highly engaging story.
Date: 4/16/2024 6:17:00 PM

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. You had me on the edge of my seat, even though I KNEW the way it would end. Shows the level of your skill, Tom. Huzzah! ~ Gershon
Date: 4/16/2024 1:25:00 PM

such interesting story telling. You'd almost think it was true. Loved it.
Date: 4/16/2024 11:22:00 AM

Hello Tom , you are quite the story teller , you had me feeling sorry for the wife and two daughters back in 1856, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and to keep it in rhyme was excellent , I'm so impressed and will make a concerted effort to read more of your incredible work . Danny
Date: 4/15/2024 11:29:00 PM

Very engaging story Tom. Enjoyed
Date: 4/15/2024 5:01:00 PM

What an intriguing and thoroughly engaging read, Tom. What a nasty fall you experienced...your trip to 1856 reminded me of a TV series I watched in which the main character was in a coma and went back in time receiving messages of what to do via his television. There's a lot we don't know about the comatose state let alone parallel worlds. But your poem with its 'other worldly' quality left much to ponder. Am faving. No I know how you injured your back. Wow! have a great evening, Sara
Date: 4/15/2024 3:36:00 PM

What an interesting story/poem you’ve told of your experience in days of old, then coming back to your life and wife, plus the aerial that needs putting right. A most enjoyable read Tom, well done… Beryl
Date: 4/15/2024 1:46:00 PM

Well enjoyed read of very interesting story/poem! A favorite, have a nice day ~AA
Date: 4/15/2024 12:29:00 PM

Brilliant story, Tom, a tale with a dream in it. That's the beginning of a leap year. Well done.
Date: 4/15/2024 10:03:00 AM

You are an amazing story teller, Tom: I like these kind of time travel stories. Have you seen “The Yankee in Connecticut. Starring Bing Crosby. The beach must be good for you. Cheers, SuZ
Date: 4/15/2024 7:52:00 AM

Love your exquisite ability to weabe a story within a poem. And I know you like science fictyio, These two combined mahe the perfect poetic cocktail. Thank you. Enjoy Crete. Pangie xx
Date: 4/15/2024 6:23:00 AM

Time travel has always intrigued me, and though your great story is not quite along that line, you sure can tell a story in rhyme that holds the interest of a reader! Great work, Doc!
Date: 4/15/2024 6:20:00 AM

Just goes to show you Tom, we can never be sure of anything after a nasty fall and knock on the head, but then again parallel worlds are a concept even physicists try explore, at least you didn’t find yourself heading up the charge of the light brigade at balaclava lol! I remember Rod hull (the emu guy) fell off his roof and died, he was trying to fix a tv antenna during a football match, excellent storytelling as always, cheers David
Date: 4/15/2024 6:19:00 AM

Tom, you are the master of story telling.
Date: 4/15/2024 5:54:00 AM

Quite intriguing story, Tom. You had me glued to your page with mysterious images--perhaps emerging from a world we see on the other side. Splendidly delivered!
Date: 4/15/2024 3:32:00 AM

Loved this! Well done! Please don't fix your aerial anytime soon!! Another favourite for me :)

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