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Missing Rib

Should we be amazed,
Denise Williams song "Silly"
Rotates in my head,
A song she forgot about
In her ear it resonates

Scribe Marlon Linton

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  1. Date: 5/20/2013 5:30:00 PM

    Hi Scribe, stopping by to drop a smile :-) It was nice seeing you on line today. I'm watching an old flick called "Killer Clowns from space..." lol.. very lame hu! what have you been u to. nothing much under my sunny days here in Texas... :-)... see u later Linda
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 4:58:00 PM

    I haven't heard of the singer I am so out of tune! ;) Light & Love
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 3:50:00 AM

    Hey fam..I just maybe heading that way towards retirement..waiting on you. Lol
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 9:02:00 PM

    Hi Scribe :-) I'm taking this moment to wish you an early Happy Mother's day. Just in case, I can't hang around the soup past Saturday Night. May you enjoy all the blessings a mother engraves in our hearts. Okay, the real reason I'm here.. I know you will find your way to my newest poem soon. called "Summers Eve"... I hope you don't mind I thought of this poem, when i wrote this line in my poem... " I AM THE SPAWN OF ADAM'S RIB."... he he he.. I had to give my poem a small little twist... PD
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 9:02:00 PM

    hoping to see a new one from you soon...Linda
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 4:23:00 PM

    Just dropping in knw it's been a while, but guess who's back, love always fam<3 Carma
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 6:45:00 PM

    Dear Marlon, I am so sorry to hear about your daughter and your mom, they say when it rains it pours, hope they are recovering well, and yes, anytime you want to dance, give me a shout, and we will make beautiful poetry together, have a great evening, xxxx Rose
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 2:53:00 PM

    LOL, I don't know what to say about the title. Coming back to read your tanka, and say hi. Maybe you can explain the poem a little through soup mail. Take Care and have yourself a nice day. LUV* ~SKAT~
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 1:54:00 PM

    I love Denise Williams, always have. Soupmail :) hugs, catie
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 10:26:00 AM

    Great poem. It's making me think hard. Love the tanka
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 5:47:00 PM

    I don't get this one but I know it's based on my lack of knowledge. I still enjoyed reading it. :)
  1. Date: 4/22/2013 2:04:00 PM

    Welcome back Marlon! xxx
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 10:51:00 AM

    Hello Scribe, how are you?? where are you???? miss seeing you around here... Linda
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 9:57:00 PM

    ha kind of feel guilty after reading this Scribe,,, how are you?? Have not seen you around for a while now.. anyways, stopping by to see if you been active...Thank you for sharing, ~Always & Forever *LINDA
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 11:01:00 AM

    An interesting take, ~*~SKAT
  1. Date: 4/11/2013 5:02:00 PM

    I'm sadly lacking in knowledge of who's who in the music world but this one of your makes it's own music. Has a nice lilt to it! :)
  1. Date: 4/7/2013 10:04:00 AM

    You mentioned some of my favourite artists in that comment of yours. You had me smiling had to come back to tell you :) enjoy the weekend!
  1. Date: 4/7/2013 4:08:00 AM

    Love the Tanka fam...I agree with Wilma's comment!!
  1. Date: 4/7/2013 1:01:00 AM

    This is nice and reminded me of a great song, "Get Out Of My Mind, And Into My Car" how Ironic, fantastic, piece, Fam.. Love always Carma
  1. Date: 4/6/2013 5:13:00 AM

    Poet Linton,I just love listening to oldies.Kinda bring the mindset back to times long gone,but still has that "feel-good" era to it and I guess will bring that to generations in the future.Thanks for your great comment earlier this week.Im slowly but surely heading back into the game again,taking one day at the time.Take Care Poet!
  1. Date: 4/4/2013 1:39:00 PM

    Would it be silly of me to admit that is one of my favourite songs Scribe? Needless to say I absolutely love this write of yours. You always take my mind into another realm, which is a good thing ;) hope you are doing good!
  1. Date: 4/3/2013 2:08:00 PM

    I trust your taste Scribe - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 4/2/2013 10:46:00 PM

    hmmm, I think this must be a song I don't know. I like what you did with it though. songs get stuck in our minds and I have had some that I just could not get them out of my mind!
  1. Date: 4/2/2013 2:26:00 PM

    Very cute and clever Marlon! An excellent TANKA with perfect meter. BRAVO!! Best wishes, Keith
  1. Date: 4/2/2013 12:33:00 PM

    - Do not know the song .... but turn up the volume so I can hear .... well done Marlon! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/2/2013 10:42:00 AM

    hey now this is truly a wondrous Tanka, Well i know you are not indeed just out to score, yet your poetry does it for me...

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