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Snail's Point of View

Written by Gail DeBole 0n April 30, 2013
Updated by Gail DeBole on May 12, 2013


Transit System
The underside of a gutter guard
Moved for mowing...
Destination - 7 feet away from home.
A lone snail hitches a ride.

Amusement Park Ride
Clinging to the garage door
As it moves upward.
Clinging to the garage door
As it moves downward.
A lone snail waits for a second ride.










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  1. Date: 5/16/2013 11:36:00 AM

    love these lines. Great write. God Bless. Dave.
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 10:18:00 AM

    Lovely read. Congrats on your membership renewal!
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 7:50:00 AM

    Lots of smiles! Great write, dear Gail! You made my day! Blessings, Hanitra
  1. Date: 5/8/2013 2:39:00 PM

    Cool, very real to life! Enjoyed reading it, Gail.
  1. Date: 5/8/2013 8:28:00 AM

    Good and I love it. Nurudeen
  1. Date: 5/8/2013 8:08:00 AM

    A nice poem. I like it. Welcome to the Soup Gail. -Mohammad
  1. Date: 5/8/2013 7:42:00 AM

    Nice thoughts, Gail, you are welcome in this community with your sincere prtraits and memories
  1. Date: 5/8/2013 5:13:00 AM

    Interesting lines I welcome you friend on this beautiful ground of Poetry Soup, where we all share our dreams, laughter's and pains with each other. With best wishes......Ravindra
  1. Date: 5/8/2013 12:58:00 AM

    Captivating! Welcome Gail! Welcome to our loving family!
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 8:24:00 PM

    Prospective is everything isn't it Gail . Good job and welcome!
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 5:22:00 PM

    DELIGHTFUL... WELCOME!!! xoxox
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 5:03:00 PM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup Gail...
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 4:49:00 PM

    this is really cute. Just got in my email the message that you are a new lifetime member. YOu are the first person I ever saw them do that for. Congratulations and welcome.
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 4:17:00 PM

    Clever pen my friend and welecome to poetry soup.
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 3:50:00 PM

    Luv it. Welcome. Rick
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 3:37:00 PM

    Nice poem Gail, welcome to poetry soup xxx
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 3:25:00 PM

    Well.... As I figure it, you saved that snail about a weeks travel time.... Great write.... Jake
  1. Date: 5/5/2013 10:58:00 AM

    Well done,Gail!!! - - Wishing you a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/4/2013 8:20:00 PM

    Thank you Gail, for the visit. some ride. hope the snail finds it's way home... like the little verse... xox~ LINDA
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 4:59:00 PM

    I fancy short poems.. They have their own mysticism. This poem with its mono-scene is full of meanings. Lovely write!
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 10:35:00 PM

    !!!
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 7:59:00 PM

    CLEVER....GAIL...LIKE IT...

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