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Peat-whisky dreams


Evening finds ascension
on a Red Grouse wing;
the brilliant copper sky 
fades to twilight beam.
 
 
It wafts the weathered flora
of a season’s ending term,
as young Skylarks soundly sleep
in the nearby bracken fern.
 
 
The purple hue glints playfully
on a steep highland muir,
with lovers lying blithesome 
on the fragrant heather floor,
 
 
their drunk love on crescendo
with a piper's distant drone;
sharing peat-whisky dreams
amid the summer’s final gloam.




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  1. Date: 6/14/2013 9:13:00 AM

    Beautiful poem! -Edward
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 10:05:00 PM

    I find it difficult to write a poem layered with such fancy wording, but you seem to do it well. I agree with previous commentors, it has a real nice fantasy ring to it.
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 6:31:00 AM

    Words that paint a picture........art.
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 10:51:00 AM

    Hi Thvia just came to read your latest poem, I will come back soon.....David
  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:39:00 AM

    Perfectly writen! No over use of colors and rhyming that would satisfy any poet.
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 3:03:00 PM

    very nice. You've painted a wonderful word poem. Jack
  1. Date: 1/26/2013 5:03:00 PM

    Thvia, :-) Congrats in Mystic's "FANTASY FANTASY FANTASY" fun contest... God Bless*LINDA
  1. Date: 1/24/2013 12:57:00 PM

    Congrats on your win. Connie
  1. Date: 1/24/2013 12:19:00 PM

    So beautifully written... Congrats on your win.
  1. Date: 1/24/2013 11:27:00 AM

    It lives, it breathes, it leaves this reader speechles...you have talent !! enjoyed the read and Congrats on the win !! woo hoo !!
  1. Date: 1/24/2013 10:02:00 AM

    Holy gorgeous write!! Congrats!
  1. Date: 1/24/2013 8:46:00 AM

    just beautifully written..Wonderful
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 6:05:00 PM

    Wonderful imagery, and flow... great all round... Terry
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 11:46:00 PM

    Yes, I think it might fit that theme of fantasy. Because of the way you call it dreams!!!
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:53:00 PM

    E.R.Burroughs I'm a big fan too, I taught my son to love reading with The Martian chronicles! This seems so Scotland or Ireland have you seen peat cut? the moors..etc? Just lovely Thvia [hey did you realize John Carter was also the name of the hero in the Terminator? I JUST got that..?!] Light & Love
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 2:19:00 PM

    amazing Thvia,, truly amazing,, this is classical poetry at it's best... just love this...
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 1:17:00 PM

    The stuff poems are made of.
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 1:03:00 PM

    One of your best to date.... All these comments below are so true... I'm working my way back into Soup after a leave of absence but catching up slowly.. xoox Michael
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 11:19:00 AM

    Going to put it in my collection of favs... this is spectacular! Love your name by the way! Hugs, Jack xox
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 8:41:00 AM

    To say the least, I am so damn pleased you aren't stuck in writers block anymore! You have so much talent girl, so much! This is SENSATIONAL!
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 2:03:00 AM

    Hi Thvia just stunning love it going to my favs, all the best Owen
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 8:55:00 AM

    A very interesting poem... A facinating read.
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 6:30:00 PM

    I love it more every time I read it...
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 2:45:00 PM

    well some cool metaphores and lovly theame here thankyou for comments on mine xx davidscott
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 10:11:00 AM

    You have a wide range of vocabulary and the poem is very beautiful Thvia, Is Tvia an abbreviation for a longer name? It is a lovely name take care, xxx
  1. Date: 1/17/2013 11:57:00 PM

    this is very lovely and dreamy. Is it for the fantasy contest by chance?
  1. Date: 1/17/2013 6:06:00 PM

    wonderful write Thvia
  1. Date: 1/17/2013 3:09:00 PM

    I love all the colorful images in this write, Thvia..and thanks so much for stopping by my writes. Light & Love
  1. Date: 1/17/2013 11:16:00 AM

    Really well done Thvia, the flow is good.. the scenes are vibrant; there is the reality That breaks into your awareness..!
  1. Date: 1/17/2013 7:56:00 AM

    I have never been to Scotland and now I have a sudden urge to visit.
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