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You're my what....?!

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You're my what....?!

           This is not my WORLD.

           You're my WORLD.

           You're my EVERYTHING.

           You're the FLOWERS, the GRASS, 

           You're my THOUGHTS,

           You're my EVERYTHING.
           This is not my WORLD.
           You're my WORLD.
          So now.....
                be part of my.....

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  1. Date: 3/31/2011 1:48:00 AM
    beautiful thoughts and expressions i love it. - edward

  1. Date: 10/12/2010 1:20:00 PM
    fixation turns into frustration

  1. Date: 10/10/2010 3:40:00 PM
    I lvoe the poem, full of emotion and love. Just dont let it step you to a side.. Seems like anice ride. have yourself a nice one,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/17/2010 7:47:00 AM
    Who could resist? This one shoots right into one's head. I like the daring. I'm sorry to be late. I'm lazy and seldom check my mail. It's more than lazy, though. My eyes are bad and I have to budget my time at the laptop. Dave

  1. Date: 9/13/2010 6:00:00 AM
    I could not agree more with Deborah..... You must be able to love yourself before you can love someone else.... Wonderful write my friend...:JP]

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 2:32:00 PM
    You are going to a dangerous place. You must be all those things for yourself ..first. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 2:03:00 PM
    a rare and beautiful beast