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Below is the poem entitled YOUR BLACK DRESS, WOW which was written by poet Amit Valmiki. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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My eyes were habituated to gaze,
what they used to see is only your face.
but yesterday, seeing you in that black dress.
My innocent heart appeared to be in a mess.
For me, you looked like a fairy, 
at time, I wrote my feelings in a diary.
What a magic is there in your beauty, 
that usually put my mind soothe.
So lucky was your black dress!
having to your body a friction.
Heating me with the fire of jealous,
shown miracle that increased my addiction.

  Amit Valmiki

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  1. Date: 9/3/2012 12:59:00 PM
    nice write

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 8:24:00 PM
    A lovely inspiring poem filled with beautiful diction and true sentiments of love! Thank you for sharing!