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Young, Sweet, Sincere- Love.

Really wish it was easy as I thought, And no matter how I fought… I stood back and watched fall apart. Family life was too much to bear. Especially when he wasn’t there, I was consumed by hurt and despair. We left all that together; To find a place that was better… And the only thing I left was a little blue letter. With no plans and glassy eyes, I left them with no goodbyes; And we disappeared in the sunrise. Our future is blurry, I wanted grow up in a hurry… We left our safety for a place less sturdy. With the scars I wear so well, And all the low places that I fell. All my stories I will tell. With mistakes he made, The games he played… But I still stayed Even though it’s not laid out in stone… I am not afraid to go; And wish I won’t be alone. It’ll be okay if you’re alright And we’re together day and night; We’re young and know how to fight. We’re not crazy, Just lost in reality… And just he completes me. Young, sweet, sincere… love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/11/2010 5:16:00 PM
A belated congratulations to you on your win in this contest, emily, hope you are having a great Christmas season. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/15/2010 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Emily in Linda-Marie's contest "One in a Million". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/14/2010 8:27:00 AM
A very moving poem, Emily, and I'm glad you have a man who "completes" you. Beautifully written and so worthy of its win. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/11/2010 11:13:00 AM
Congrats, Emily. Beautiful. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 11/10/2010 11:27:00 PM
Emily...congrats on well deserved win ......... Luv/best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/10/2010 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, emily
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Date: 11/9/2010 5:36:00 PM
Congratulations Emily on your poem's honered place in the tope ten. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/9/2010 5:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Emily! Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/9/2010 3:58:00 PM
Congrats Emily on your success in my One in a Million contest with this cool and cute entry written so sweetly .. enjoy and thankxxx for supporting my contest with luv..
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Date: 5/13/2010 6:16:00 PM
love can be so sweet, and every thing you mentioned in your write, nicely done,..p.d.
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Date: 5/13/2010 5:23:00 PM
Sure not sure, sounds like young people who are confused and not really sure what they want. interesting write.
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Date: 5/13/2010 4:42:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one...I feel that this is about two teens leaving home too soon to start a life of their own..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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