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Young, Sweet, Sincere- Love.

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Young, Sweet, Sincere- Love.

Really wish it was easy as I thought,
And no matter how I fought…
I stood back and watched fall apart.

Family life was too much to bear.
Especially when he wasn’t there,
I was consumed by hurt and despair.

We left all that together;
To find a place that was better…
And the only thing I left was a little blue letter.

With no plans and glassy eyes,
I left them with no goodbyes;
 And we disappeared in the sunrise. 

Our future is blurry,
I wanted grow up in a hurry…
We left our safety for a place less sturdy.

With the scars I wear so well,
And all the low places that I fell.
All my stories I will tell.

With mistakes he made,
The games he played…
But I still stayed

Even though it’s not laid out in stone…
I am not afraid to go;
And wish I won’t be alone.

It’ll be okay if you’re alright
And we’re together day and night;
We’re young and know how to fight.

We’re not crazy,
Just lost in reality…
And just he completes me.

Young, sweet, sincere… love. 

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  1. Date: 12/11/2010 5:16:00 PM
    A belated congratulations to you on your win in this contest, emily, hope you are having a great Christmas season. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/15/2010 9:56:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Emily in Linda-Marie's contest "One in a Million". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/14/2010 8:27:00 AM
    A very moving poem, Emily, and I'm glad you have a man who "completes" you. Beautifully written and so worthy of its win. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/11/2010 11:13:00 AM
    Congrats, Emily. Beautiful. Nice going. xxxRalph

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 11:27:00 PM
    Emily...congrats on well deserved win ......... Luv/best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 5:25:00 AM
    Congratulations on this well deserved win, emily

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 5:36:00 PM
    Congratulations Emily on your poem's honered place in the tope ten. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 5:00:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the contest, Emily! Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 3:58:00 PM
    Congrats Emily on your success in my One in a Million contest with this cool and cute entry written so sweetly .. enjoy and thankxxx for supporting my contest with luv..

  1. Date: 5/13/2010 6:16:00 PM
    love can be so sweet, and every thing you mentioned in your write, nicely done,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/13/2010 5:23:00 PM
    Sure not sure, sounds like young people who are confused and not really sure what they want. interesting write.

  1. Date: 5/13/2010 4:42:00 PM
    Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one...I feel that this is about two teens leaving home too soon to start a life of their own..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara