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Wrathful Sky -Diddeax O

Lightning illuminates a tornado 
 A double image of furiousness
Primal


Diddeaux O tercet
for Debbie Guzzi Haiku Wannabee

stormhaiku

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Edward Orozco

Date: 6/14/2013 9:00:00 AM

Short and so powerful this image is! :). Truly you are of much talent - Edward

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/11/2013 7:39:00 PM

You had such a good line 3, the word that CAN be used as a refrain. To place higher you needed to write more, for me more is always better, the form has the opportunity for a refrain, why not use it? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/11/2013 6:55:00 PM

It really is Primal..congrats on your win. BG

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/11/2013 6:06:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this unique and creative work..Thanks for stopping by..I am honored that you would fav it..Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/9/2013 2:48:00 PM

clever poetry, so very visual...

Timothy Jacks

Date: 6/8/2013 6:00:00 PM

It reminds me of this past storm we had it was feirce and a terror to behold. Of this poem like the storm is beautiful in my eyes

Christine Phillips

Date: 6/8/2013 12:09:00 PM

Hi Suz, nice captivating poem. I like this line "Lightning illuminates a tornado"very powerful line.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/7/2013 2:17:00 PM

good write Shadow x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2013 6:20:00 PM

suz, I finally gave this form a look see, and I think I should be able to come up with something. There are some pretty interesting forms for us to try out!

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 6/6/2013 3:42:00 PM

I like this. I am not familiar with this form like Andrea but I enjoyed this. Well done.

Elai Cee

Date: 6/6/2013 6:10:00 AM

nothing to say but great! ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/5/2013 11:58:00 PM

- The "evil" comes with its power .... well done, SuZ !! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 6/5/2013 11:02:00 PM

Hmm a double content poem so fiery in dis new form! Wows!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2013 10:40:00 PM

so THIS is diddeax? I GOTTA study that out. Well, it sure looks like you did a great job of it. And I'm so glad you understand the joys of handsies!!

Wrathful Sky -Diddeax O

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